please let me know what you guys think about my poem
By sourcherry
@sourcherry (159)
August 17, 2008 5:17pm CST
its been while since i wrote one so bare with me..
I see your face in my dreams
I see your face on other people when I walk down the street
all i do is think about you.. and us
the way things would have worked out
you were the best thing that ever happened to me
I honestly thought we were ment to be
we had ups and downs, we laughed, i cried
so many tears i cried for you
and all for what?
some one please tell me
what is it about this man that drives so crazy
yes i can picture us married and having kids
but that doesn't change the fact of what you did
you took my heart that one cold June night
and never gave it back
its ok i forgive you for what you did
because you will never find a girl like me
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@skipple_20 (33)
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18 Aug 08
wow your really him don't you?? for i think it was a really nice poem.. why don't you give it to him and the propose?? huh?? never mind.. hehehee... anyway. that was awesome points..
@sourcherry (159)
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18 Aug 08
i miss him soooo much a poem is the only thing that i could do to let him know