please let me know what you guys think about my poem

August 17, 2008 5:17pm CST
its been while since i wrote one so bare with me.. I see your face in my dreams I see your face on other people when I walk down the street all i do is think about you.. and us the way things would have worked out you were the best thing that ever happened to me I honestly thought we were ment to be we had ups and downs, we laughed, i cried so many tears i cried for you and all for what? some one please tell me what is it about this man that drives so crazy yes i can picture us married and having kids but that doesn't change the fact of what you did you took my heart that one cold June night and never gave it back its ok i forgive you for what you did because you will never find a girl like me
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18 Aug 08
wow your really him don't you?? for i think it was a really nice poem.. why don't you give it to him and the propose?? huh?? never mind.. hehehee... anyway. that was awesome points..
18 Aug 08
i miss him soooo much a poem is the only thing that i could do to let him know