Your opinions on my Website
By beki710
@beki710 (949)
August 23, 2008 6:52am CST
Hey guys over the past few weeks I've been setting up my own website and I was wondering if anybody out there would be kind enough to give me a bit of feedback? Not necessarily on the products but moe on the layout how easy you find it to nvigate and the overall image of the site. It's not completely finished but anything you would like to say about it would be greatly appreciated!
www.overdramaticdesigns.co.uk
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5 responses
@iakulchen (615)
• Singapore
23 Aug 08
Like someone already said, too much space on the left hand side. "Everything else" also sounds... strange, I say "Other products' would be a better choice. "Contact Us" also doesn't quite fit when you ae using "i" and "me" throughout the "Contact Us". Either change all the "our" to "my", if you are aiming for a site witha personal feel, or if you are trying to convey a company image, you'l have to rewrite the "Contact Us" part.
Quite a few typos on the site.
"definately" on the contact us page should be "definitely".
Typos on "important Info" page
"All payments are done through Paypal. A" should be "All payments are done through Payapl, a
"If you are wanting" should be "If you want"
"I am only delivery" should be "I am only delivering"
"Due to the nature of most the" should be "Due to the nature of most of the"
"the item is faulty; due" should be "the item is faulty, due"
"you can use Paypal whether or not you have a Paypal account" should be rewritten as "you do not need to have a Paypal account to send to another Paypal account" since the original sentence is both grammatically and factually wrong.
It's possible I missed a few, so try to get someone to proofread for you and weed out those errors.
@funzone (86)
• India
23 Aug 08
It's ok but if you put the items as in a table then it will look much more better.
@yadav8797 (1211)
• India
24 Aug 08
hey friend, i like your site very much. i appreciate your effort of creating such a nice website. i think in future you can create great webdesign or you may become a web designer. friend i want to know that how can you create this nice site. are you use any software etc. to creating this website or just by simple coding.which language you are general used in designing of this site
@Vestergarden (72)
• Denmark
23 Aug 08
A okay website.
Easy to surf on...
But it look a bit to homemade and private, to I would buy anything...
Reliable is the best tool when you want to sell things on the Internet. Try to make it look a bit more professional.