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By glords
@glords (2614)
United States
4 responses
@Ldyjarhead (10233)
• United States
6 Oct 08
I put spaces every few lines so that it is easier to read. What you posted is NOT easier to read.
@Ldyjarhead (10233)
• United States
6 Oct 08
Not at all. Just explaining how/why I do things the way I do.
@SaintAnne (5453)
• United States
6 Oct 08
First of all, I hope you realize that your post makes for a great poem.
I am guilty of this madness once in a while. But it's because I can't think of what else to add to such sentence so I need that space to emphasize that I'm starting another thought.
The Cheshire Cat still creeps me to this day... and there's always a little craziness in everyone.
@glords (2614)
• United States
6 Oct 08
You make me blush. Nobody has ever called me a poet before. Well its not iambic pentameter, but it does have a lot of spaces. I tried to make a picture with my words. I guess that could be considered poetry. Thanks for noticing.
I've never been much for poetry, but do have one poem memorized...
Peeled Pencil Choke
Feel My Coke
~ Gertrude Stein
After reading that perhaps you know why I was never much into poetry. I guess I just don't get it.
@sedel1027 (17846)
• Cupertino, California
6 Oct 08
People are ridiculous. They think they are paid more if they write in such a manner - that has never proven to help BTW. Doesn't make thins easier to read. I find that people skip over such posts.
@Gemini_7000 (358)
• United States
6 Oct 08
Easier to read.
Words/sentances don't crowd each other.
EASIER to read..again