Hook, is it an intuitive knack or can it be learned?
@thebeaddoodler (4262)
Lubbock, Texas
October 20, 2008 3:47pm CST
When you writ an article or story the title and first sentence should be a "hook" or "grabber". I know some writers just seem to have a knack for getting attention with just a few words, but can that ability be learned. Can anybody give tips other that "get attention". Sometimes I can and other times my "hook" just isn't and my grabber doesn't.
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@paid2write (5201)
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21 Oct 08
The title is important to catch people's attention and the opening paragraph must make the reader want to find out more.
If you are writing an article you can start with a question "Did you know that....!" or "Would you believe that...", or simply introduce the subject and make the reader want to know more by hinting at something that will be fully explained later in the article.
Using some of the best key words for the topic, at the start of the article, also helps in search engine optimization.
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@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
21 Oct 08
Thanks paid, that sounds so easy when you say it. I'll try learning to implement it. Thanks, I was hoping you'd chime in here.
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@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
21 Oct 08
Me too, and how to end one paragraph in such a way that they want to go on to the next one.
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@AnythngArt (3302)
• United States
21 Oct 08
I think a hook is definitely important, particularly when you are writing fiction, but critical with nonfiction (which can tend toward the more boring anyway). In one literary magazine I read, for example, they feature opening lines from novels. That should tell you something. You've got to get your reader interested and moving on to the next page, especially in the beginning. How many times have you opened a book in the bookstore and read the first line or paragraph before deciding to purchase it?
That said, it's not an easy task. Ok, it probably is easy for some writers, but I think most have to work at it. One idea I read was to just start writing, then go back (in your editing stage), and throw your first two lines out and re-write. This way, you have had time to think about where you are going/have gone with your story, and how you can use that to make a great opening.
How do you get to Carnegie Hall? How do you write a great hook? Practice, practice, practice! Good luck with your writing. The fact that you are even asking the question means you know a hook is important.
@AnythngArt (3302)
• United States
23 Oct 08
That's the sign of a true writer. I read about someone (wish I could remember the famous writer behind this story) who would still be making alterations to the story when he gave his readings. I think we always think there are things we can improve in our writing, even after they're done. But at some point, we have to move on.
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@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
22 Oct 08
I may start with a title and opening sentence. But these usually get changed. When I'm making a squidoo lens or writing for AC I always do the first draft in a word processor and go back and work it over several times before I publish it. I'm usually not happy with it even then.
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@xParanoiax (6987)
• United States
22 Oct 08
I think some people do have this naturally, but you really can learn it. Some people just take longer at getting it than others, and I don't think all people need to know how to do this, anyway.
You own style doesn't have to be like anything, it just has to be you.
I'm one of those people with "a knack"...but that doesn't mean I can do it all the time, nor do I want to, though I have made it my sincerest wish to try to learn the mechanics of this mystical "attention grabbing first sentence".
I've found that, it tends to need to just...stand out, a memorable first impression.
It can be funny, just beautiful, weird, mysterious...as long as it ties into the story, then...it grabs! The starker the contrasts the more things stand out.
But in the end, all this thought needs to be finished by intuition..in my view. What do you FEEL should be the first sentence? What do you feel would be any one of those things I just mentioned?
Then follow up with thinking on how well it fits -- and be open! Even if you don't think it's awesome, that doesn't mean someone else won't!
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@xParanoiax (6987)
• United States
27 Oct 08
We all are our own worst critics, no worries!
Well, that's the thing -- if you worry about what "most people" think too much, you can kill alot of what is awesome about your own work. So while I understand your desire for others to like it, as a writer you're not just shielded from knowing what "most people" will think of it but of how they'll feel about it too.
I've always rathered that people like my things for my stories rather than much else -- liking HOW I write the stories is a plus too, of course. I tend to put the story or message of the book in higher importance than anything else.
So I think perhaps I'm biased when I think that it's the story that matters most, not whether or not all people see what you do in it...or how they think of it.
@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
22 Oct 08
I am what I call an intuitive writer. Sometimes I can sit down and just pound out my thoughts and I'm well pleased with it, other times it's agony trying to get my thoughts on paper.
I have a problem trying to decide what will catch someone else's eye because I'm not "like other people" and what tends to catch my eye will just go completely unnoticed by the majority of people. I'm my own worst critic!
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@unusualsuspect (2602)
• United States
21 Oct 08
A hook is usually more important in non-fiction, because if you can't get the reader interested in the subject right away, they're going to move on. It's a knack, but one that can be learned. I write a lot of articles for various sites, and I've gradually learned to make the opening one that will keep a person reading. I see a lot of articles that make you go two or three paragraphs deep before you even get a good sense of what it's about. The hook has to be the first couple of sentences. I think the best way to learn how to do it is read a lot of articles and analyze what they're doing. What's the difference between the ones that make you want to keep reading and the ones that look boring?
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@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
25 Oct 08
Thank you. I have been reading and evaluating other people's writing along with advice from various sources.
@ElicBxn (63638)
• United States
21 Oct 08
When I write fiction, I've been told by people that I do a good job with that first sentance/scene. I have gotten to where I almost always start with a person saying something - I don't know why, but it seems to be a very effective hook for me. I guess that wouldn't work if you aren't writing fiction tho...
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@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
21 Oct 08
I don't usually write fiction, mostly articles on things I know about, but does a quote from somebody count as a person saying something? I started my last Sqidoo lens with a quote attributed to Hippocrates.
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@ElicBxn (63638)
• United States
21 Oct 08
Generally speaking, the quote books are thought to have the catchiest phrases by famous people and are often used as hooks. I know the roomie has used them to start stories too. I just find that I don't care to use them, myself, I don't mind reading them in other places.
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@cjgrooms (4456)
• United States
25 Oct 08
Okay, i am in no way shape or form a writer, i am however a reader and heaven knows i have plodded my way through a good many pitiful beginnings in fiction and non-fiction alike. If it is a non-fictional article about something i am intrested in i will keep going (after all i won't learn anything if i let the first sentence stop me) if it is fiction i will keep going because i know it will get better (you have to have faith). I have read several of your articles and i have NEVER had to force myself to keep going they are always informative and intresting. I have actually sent links to other people so they can read them too. However, if you think you need to improve something then i am sure you can learn whatever it is you think you need to learn.
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@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
25 Oct 08
Thanks CJ I'm my own worst critic. Somehow even my most serious writing seems childish and inept to me most of the time. I guess writing is like any craft. Practice, practice practice. I'm glad you've found my articles interesting and informative.