My Creative Writing Story.
By Undertheoath
@Undertheoath (365)
United States
December 9, 2008 7:39pm CST
I just created the first chapter of my creative writing project that I am intending to complete by summer. I will warn you it can be a bit graphic at times and I just tried to reflect a common theme throughout it thus far. If you enjoy it, click you liked it please. All comments are appreciated.
The article can be found at:
http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Game-of-Life-1.383431
2 responses
@CheshireKat (564)
• United States
10 Dec 08
Interesting, I like it. The choppy feel of the sentences at the start definitely had a deliberate feel. It's probably a little shorter than most of my writing tends to be, but it's not bad by any means. I like what it's turning into and the character (narrator specifically) definitely has a lot of potential. Nice work. :)
@Undertheoath (365)
• United States
10 Dec 08
Yeah... I am building a character.. . my next chapter is going to focus on his early life.
@gitfiddleplayer (10362)
• United States
10 Dec 08
It was cool, a little graphic like you said but very descriptive. It will be interesting to see where the characters go. I'll stay with you on it.
