A Challenge to ponder on
By rosdimy
@rosdimy (3926)
Malaysia
December 13, 2008 10:09pm CST
Below is a task or challenge I usually give to my students. The purpose is to encourage students to think out of the box.
Write a letter to a friend describing a school trip/picnic (or whatever is suitable) without using 'I', 'me', or 'myself'.
Can you do it?
all the best,
rosdimy
3 responses
@mamaafrica9 (108)
• United States
14 Dec 08
Hi Amanda,
The trip we when on Thursday, was a blast. There were many colorful characters to see. Interesting though, there were not many people there to show its appreciation. Our group decided this is wonderful place to bring our families and friends. Life like statue, wonderfully structure buildings, decorative artifacts and delicious cuisine, the place was fabulous. Everyone had fun, which was not hard to do because there is so much to see and do. It's hard to imagine living in this small town that they have such a beautiful place like this, but not enough people here to enjoy it.
@rosdimy (3926)
• Malaysia
14 Dec 08
It seems that you have had at least some experience in verbal sparring. I think even if you are not a lawyer you have some of the characteristics to become one.
It seems that there are people who are a natural when it comes to language manipulation. I just hope no one gets angry at me for starting this discussion. I believe when it comes to writing any suggestion which can help sharpen our skills should be welcomed.
Thank you for your response.
all the best,
rosdimy
@jordan04n (463)
• United States
14 Dec 08
Dear Rosie, Gone on a school trip to the zoo where the bears sleep and the birds fly in a cage. Not the usual trip expected. Hot day for such an outing but never the less enjoyed much of the day with friends of a feather ha ha. Would take this trip again in cooler weather if time comes around. Love yo you, me
@paid2write (5201)
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14 Dec 08
That is a useful challenge for any writer. I should not find it too difficult to do, because I write many informational and instructive articles, where it would be inappropriate to write from my own point of view.
When writing a guide it is sometimes necessary to address the reader directly, as 'you' (you should.. or you can...), but it is possible to write a "How To" article without using that word.
Avoiding the use of first person pronouns in a personal recollection is rather more difficult, but it can be done by using a journalistic style of reporting, writing a review of the event, or presenting it as a piece of travel writing.
@rosdimy (3926)
• Malaysia
14 Dec 08
Most of my students were unable to do it because the tendency to use first person pronouns was strong. Many of them appreciated the fact that they were being guided to use a different approach in writing. Once we get used to doing it things become easier. They understood that using a different approach would make their writing style different and can attract the attention of other people.
Thank you for your response.
all the best,
rosdimy