So Modest!

You don't put much stock in the written word to you P1ke? LOL What I mean is, you have been told many times how good you are as a writer, yet you feel 'embarrassed' about touting your skills! For shame Mr. Fish! You have nothing to be embarrassed about! I will visit the link and if I can, leave you a comment. I might even join. I'm aware of the site but haven't had the time to check it out thoroughly. See you there. Now stop blushing and start bowing......................ROFL Hugs.

Hello My Sweet friend P1ke! I wanted to say i'm here and now I'm going to read it..I will be right back.. huggs and don't ever be modest around us here!

Thank you for the link. I like your story, you have a future in writing, Keep it up! :)

P1ke, my dear, are you sure your a man? That is really good! WOW!

Hi p1ke this I have to read so will get back to you on my thoughts about it hugs LoLo

Hi ya p1kef1sh I will surely have a read of it in the near future, very near. Hey you still haven't told me what you were doing with all those favourite stories you asked evryone to tell you about!!

congrats. It might be the start of big things. Good luck in your quest. You have good writing skills so dont get discouraged.

Bravo! *clapping loudly* And such a welcomed change from the shorts I have gotten used to reading. You certainly have talent. Don't forget me when you become famous!

Hi P1ikef1sh, For some reason I couldn't post my comment but I agree with Wendy in that you could really feel what Ailsa was feeling and got lost in the story. Very suprised a the ending. Keep up the good work. Enjoyed it immensely. Huggles. Ellie :D

You are truly a man of few words. And who else could pack that much detail and poignance into two pages! Mah'velous Dah'link! Keep writing!

damn p1key what a wonderful story and keeping the suspense is so good. I enjoyed reading it. Can you imagine winning £30 million and not telling anyone lol. That husband of her must have a fit when he reach home. I hope there will be a follow up of him and her unruly children. That son was really disgusting. Great story while reading it was as if I was watching it as a movie. Please do have a follow up.

Hi p1key, That was a wonderful rather sad story of woman who is nothing but a housekeeper in the end and her husband sound just like mune but instead of the telly, it the racing bikes, I love the story and you are so clever, gosh wish I won £30 millions on the lottery. I am so please it was a happy endding for her. Hugs. Tamara

It's a great read. I won't reveal so much so you'll get to read it in suspense.lol..A writer is in our midst. Good luck with your writing, this year 2009. I know you'll do good and be successful at it. My hats off to you. Keep writing and all the best.

Hey that was a refrshing story. I really liked it. Keep up the good work!

Oh that was a good story p1ke. I loved the ending. Best thing she could have done. You have a good grasp of that kind of life. I have know women who ran away from it. Only in their case it also included violence. I am glad your story did not have that in it. I get so upset these days seeing and hearing about the violence in the world and too many story tellers dwell on the violence when there is not need. It is nice when there are stories where they do not spend pages on such subjects. Keep writing. I think you have talent.

I loved it. Great job. Keep writing....Love the modesty....Look for mine coming soon. I think you will like "My Life on the 'A' train" Ainge

I'm imagining it right now... But you left off the winning numbers. :-)

Hooray for Ailsa!!! I don't think that I could have stayed as long as she did, even long enough to raise the boys to be as old as they were, I think that I would have found a way out before then.. I do hope she has the good sense not to give one penny to any of the ones who took her for granted or who mistreated her.. I do love a good story and a "fairy tale ending".. Great job I would love an autographed copy when the entire book comes out.. I do know there is more where that came from and I am looking forward to reading about how she made it through each day while living with these pigs..

Good for you - it was a marvellous story! You're now a multimedia personality, P1key ... storyreading, publishing - what next? I eagerly await your next excursion into the fray!

Wow, that is an inspirational, amazing and well written story. Have you ever looked into posting stories on one of those pay content site, or submitting to a writting contest?