Here's a lil poem i wrote....its called A Lonely Road....
By Zerric
@Zerric (72)
India
January 12, 2009 7:48am CST
and yes it is about heartbreak.......its easier for me to write about that than it is for me to write about love.......
A lonely road in front of me,
A lonely road behind,
The scars of love are my identity,
But still she's on my mind,
A lonely road is traveled alone,
Is what is always said,
This lonely road will be my home,
But still she's in my head,
A lonely sky spreads out above,
The rain: its way to cry,
I cannot stand, what they call love,
Why won't this feeling die?
I know sometimes that love won't fail,
Its happened in the past,
But to me Love is just a fairy tale,
And Forevers never last,
4 responses
@aisaellis22 (6445)
• United States
20 Jan 09
Hello Zerric! Very well written. I mean, I love how the way you deliver it. But it seems this poem has a negative outlook about love. I hope that the next time you wrote a poem as lovely as this, love wouldn't be very tale anymore.
@kikhaye_me (1)
• Philippines
12 Jan 09
wow..short but nice poem u got there. did u just had a bad experience in love? reading each lines...it must have been really hard for you, i assume.
@antioxidant (438)
• Australia
12 Jan 09
Pretty negative outlook heh.. Nice poem you wrote. It seems to clearly express how you feel