Comment my poem- i want to be your angel
By lovesummer
@lovesummer (1162)
Malaysia
January 16, 2009 4:49pm CST
i wrote some poems, tell me how you like my poems thanks criticism are welcome:)
i want to be your angel
just like another human
though i am invisible
yet always by your side
with a pair of beautiful feathery wings
like the one in your fantasies
I want to be the angel
tall giant titanic
puissant and undestroyable
have my wings around you
protect you all the time
cyclone
hurricane
monsoon
tunderstorm
lightening
tornado
gust
blast
spears
whatsoever
unpenetratable
imperishable immortal
have you embraced
protect you under my arms forever
you're always safe
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2 responses
@newzealtralian (3930)
• Australia
17 Jan 09
You write beautiful poetry. Keep it up and soon you will be able to publish your own book. I want first copy! lol.