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I liked your subject and your thoughts on it. Your English is not that good, I understand this, English is a very hard language, there are many words alike but different for different tenses, (past, present and future) lived, live, and will live are some examples. It would be worth your time to learn about these, then your writing will be more respected. I don't know what kind of programs are available on the internet for this subject. Good luck to you and keep it up. I'm always proud to know someone willing to try new things. English grammer is what you should be looking for.