Cole's Stories 2
By choltonr409
@choltonr409 (48)
United States
February 11, 2009 7:16pm CST
One day a kid named Robert was sitting at home watching television. His brother Bill had invited a friend over named Mike. Robert and Mike had know each other and played on Xbox together a lot. When Mike arrived they all went to Wal-mart where they caused trouble. They rode bikes around the store, threw spongey footballs at each other, took things off of shelves and put them where they shouldnt be. Mike even tryed to start a fight with another kid who was not bothering anyone. After a while they got bored of that stuff and started looking for other stuff to do. When they saw a Wal-mart worker enter a door off limits to customers they followed. They continued following him through several doors until they lost sight of him. They were lost. They searched for hours trying to find their way out but only found new doors. They then started arguing with each other and split up. Robert looked longer until he collapsed and went to sleep. When he woke up he was in his house and his brother told him to get ready because thy were going to Wal-mart.
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@KrauseHome (36448)
• United States
13 Feb 09
What a dream. I am not sure what to think about it, but this would be almost a night mare, and if I were the child I am not sure I would want to go to WalMart. But this is quite interesting for sure. If you are thinking about Writing a story or combination of stories to share, this is definately a Good start.