Which one will you use?
By dpk262006
@dpk262006 (58676)
Delhi, India
March 4, 2009 6:17am CST
Here is a very simple question. You have a draft of a short story, which is either hand written or has been written in ink. You are required to 'edit' and 'modify' the said draft. You have a pen and a pencil with you. Which one will you use a pen or a pencil to modify the draft and the reasons for using the same. Thanks for your lovely responses in advance.
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30 responses
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
No, dear you are not required to write it again, you have to use either pen or pencil to modify it, what will you use?
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you know the difference between using a pen or pencil. I may add here taht if you decide to use a pencil, it tells about your nature and it also means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
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@mayka123 (16605)
• India
5 Mar 09
I think I would like to use the pencil. It is easy to erase if there are more modifications to be done. Though I am more used to writing with a pen because the writing is more clear with a pen I think I would use a pencil for the modifications.
What is the purpose for asking? Are you sending out some drafts of your novel to us???
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@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you know the difference between using a pen or pencil. I may add here that if you decide to use a pencil, it tells about your nature and it also means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You take a decision after due considerations. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@sweetie1026 (1718)
• Philippines
4 Apr 09
i will use a pencil, so that i will not be ruining the draft. that way it will be easier to see the corrections because they are all written in pencil. i think, it is much neater to use a pencil.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
6 Apr 09
HI! Sweetie!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@paula27661 (15811)
• Australia
5 Mar 09
A pencil would make more sense to me because if I am editing I would probably want to chop and change things along the way so a pencil would permit erasing errors without making a huge mess of the text.
Is there a psychological significance to the answer we choose?
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@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
Paula!
You are the one who could sense that it is a psychological question, rather than a simple one.
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@aisaellis22 (6445)
• United States
4 Mar 09
Hello deepak! Whew, this is hard..hehehe..I'm kidding! Well, I guess mostly here would probably choose pencil for editing. Pen would be better for it because we can erase some errors and it will still look clean.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
4 Mar 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@aisaellis22 (6445)
• United States
4 Mar 09
oh wow! this is great!hehehe..I can't believe it has meanings..I guess you're the smartest deepak..hahahah..
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@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
I do not start a discussion without any purpose or meaning.
Thanks for your kind words about me, you are smart too!!
@lkbooi (16070)
• Malaysia
5 Mar 09
Hi dpk, there are always pencil and pen on my computer desk. Since it is only a draft of a short story, so I think what is important for me during that moment is to make the edit and modify in time, so that I won’t forget what I want to do later on. So I will simply seize what is nearer to me, no matter it’s a pen or a pencil as I know both of these could serve their purpose respectively well. What's more it's only for personal use only.
Actually nowadays I seldom using pen or pencil anymore for I depend most writing work on my laptop. As the said story is only a brief one so I would rather like to type it out and do the editing and modifying on the computer. Yeah, the required edited and modified short story would look more decent on a printed paper.
Happy posting and take care.
@lkbooi (16070)
• Malaysia
13 Apr 09
Oh yeah, I haven’t answered your question yet instead of keeping on telling others which are boring. If sitting an exams, definitely you will give me a big Zero lol
Ok, here is my belated answer. I will choose a pen, for I have confidence that the modification I have made is wonderful and acceptable , I don’t want to see them to be deleted
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@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
21 Aug 09
Good to know that you have enough confidence and you would use a pen.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
I agree with your views, however, if you are require to choose either of the two, as per my discussion, what will you do?
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@apsara60 (6610)
• Israel
5 Apr 09
It is very simple deepak, if the story is still a draft which is to be edited, then a pencil should be used so that you can easily erase it and keep on editing it again and again, till you are convinced that now your draft is final and ready for printing. Of-course you can use tippex to erase pen ink, but still it is messy and time consuming, you many even forget what change you wanted to make as you concentration is diverted. Have a great day.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
21 Aug 09
You are smart enough, therefore, you would use a pencil. Thanks for sharing.
@checapricorn (16061)
• United States
4 Mar 09
H[i]I dpk,
I will use my pencil so that it will be easy for me to edit, erase without leaving a lot of mess in my work![/i]
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
You appear to me very wise and you will surely succeed in your life, many thanks for responding.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap. Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@Sreekala (34312)
• India
2 Apr 09
Hi Deepak,
I love to use a pencil not only for editing but for writing also. Don’t think that it can be erased and write it again later. I hate to use an eraser which will loose the beauty of the paper. Usually I prefer to rewrite the same but you don’t give an option for rewriting so I will go with pencil for editing.
I am sorry for being late. I don’t know how I skipped your discussion.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
4 Apr 09
Hello! Sree!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
There is no question of you feeling bad on account of delayed response. Your response is always welcome.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
5 Mar 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@maygodblessu44 (7336)
• India
5 Mar 09
Hello my friend dpk262006 Ji,
I would love to make use of 'Pencil' only at first instance, with reason to erase my
editing, till I come to make it final. After all, I may keep changing its contents, as
I go into details of it. May god bless you and have a great time.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@camelhjx0 (83)
• China
4 Mar 09
LOL~~~The question is simple ,and the answer is simple too, I will choose pencil!
Is there any saying about the pen or pencil??What is the meaning about that I have chosen the pencil?Thanks a lot.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
4 Mar 09
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. I'll let you know what using a pencil means, meanwhile make a guess, why did you choose a pencil over a pen?
Thanks for the first one to start responding.
@Darkwing (21583)
•
5 Mar 09
I would use a pencil, because that way, it's easier to separate your markings from your original draft, and also, because that's the way I learned at school. If you make a mistake in editing, you can also erase them easily.
Brightest Blessings.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@faith210 (11224)
• Philippines
5 Mar 09
Hi deepak! I will definitely be using a pencil to modify the draft. Sometimes, I tend not to be satisfied after one or two revisions or modifications so I need to erase some of it. If I will be using a pen, it will make the draft looks so dirty as I will try to block the edited words while using a pencil, it will at least be a lot cleaner if I just do some erasures.
Take care and have a great day!
lovelots..faith
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
Hello! Dear!
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@AnnieOakley1 (5596)
• Canada
5 Mar 09
Why a RED PEN, of course! That way my editing will be easy to tell apart from the original and they can take or leave what I have added or changed.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
If you use pen for correction, you can not just earse it and this way your leave little scope for more improvement. You can use good quality pencils.
Thanks for sharing and joining.
@DonnaLawson (4032)
• United States
4 Mar 09
I would use a pencil for any editing. That way if I changed my mind a second time and had overlooked a mistake, it wouldn't be quite as messy as it would with an ink pen.. I think any first draft, if handwritten, should be done in pencil, then when you have it exactly right, do it in ink.. But then again, I always make mistakes, I may need to just stick with the pencil always..
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
You appear very smart and intelligent because you could guess that using a pen or a pencil will have different meanings. I appreciate your response. If you use a pencil, it will tell about your nature and it means that you are very caring and donot take undue risks in your life. You look before your leap.
Thanks for joining with Pencil.
@Opal26 (17679)
• United States
4 Mar 09
Hi dpk! I use a pen! I never use pencils! I just don't like
pencils! I don't know why, but I don't use them for anything
ever, not even crossword puzzles and that sometimes is a
problem! I just don't like them! I don't know what it is
about pencils! Maybe it has something to do with the consistency
of them or the smell. I just know that I refuse to use them!
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
If you use pen for correction, you can not just earse it and this way your leave little scope for more improvement. You can use good quality pencils.
Thanks for sharing and joining.
@snowcat46 (2322)
• United States
4 Mar 09
The pen. I just automatically choose a pen. The pencil doesn't write as boldly, and I have a harder time seeing what I've written with a pencil. I might miss the mistake I wanted to correct, because I can't see the lines from the pencil. Always a pen!
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
2 Apr 09
YOu have little chance to make corrections with a pen, however, with a darker pencil, you make corrections and re-draft your wordings.
Thanks for responding.