please help me.i want to write something to my BF,how can i make it more moving?
By yanxiaonuo
@yanxiaonuo (17)
China
March 28, 2009 6:20am CST
because i need you ,because you are always be my side,because i am used to your dentle,to your touch.because i want to be close to you.
i know i love you so much.
i know i cannot take you out of my life since i met you.
when you call me baby,all things arround me are turning.
when you pull me in your arms,i can feel your heart beating at a high rate.
when you were gone,i cannot find my thoughts just running towards each place you would go.
when you ....
please baby,go on calling me baby,go on "good night"every night.
for our long distance between two cities,i miss you somuch tonight.
4 responses
@bunnybon7 (50973)
• Holiday, Florida
30 Mar 09
how about saying i feel i have been put here in your life to love you as you deserve to be loved by me and iam very lucky to for i deserve a love like you.
@yanxiaonuo (17)
• China
8 Apr 09
yes,it's all about "deserve" in love,but sometimes we love a person without calling for repay.
thank you.
@yanxiaonuo (17)
• China
8 Apr 09
of course write use my hesrt to make it a moving one and show my love for him.
thanks.
@skydancer (2101)
• United States
28 Mar 09
Like the previous commentator to this discussion, romance is not really my thing either, however, I suppose I have some tips. First, I might use a thesaurus. You can even do this online at sites like thesaurus.com. Take some of the more cliched words you may use and try to find words that mean the same thing that don't sound or look too outrageous but at the same time aren't words that are commonly used. Also, try using metaphor - that is always a good vehicle to being profound in your writing. The key is to get creative and make it something uniquely you, and put all the emotion you can into it. Keep practicing, and it will get easier. You're off to a good start, I am sure your BF will love whatever you write to him. Best of luck!
@yanxiaonuo (17)
• China
8 Apr 09
i think so. the key is to keep creative.it must be filled with my true love.
thank you.
@Charlie_28 (78)
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28 Mar 09
Writing is an art, all the feeling during writing comes from heart and you tell us all that you want to write for your boy friend, then you should be think from your heart, Hope you like my suggession
