Hello mylotters.

Hi again, I hope you will understand and take these things as a help to you only. I have helped others to create things they have written or sites they want someone to just look at and critique so they can improve on what they already have going. With that said here goes. When writing a sentence you need to place a space after the period, quesiton mark, etc, at the end of a sentence. If you don't it is hard to read, feels like a run on run with words. Grammar still needs to be worked on to make a sentence sound or read smoothly. As well as spelling, for instance, the word 'create', you have spelled "creat". It just makes it easier for us to read. Gives your posts a better look and feel as well. As far as the content of your posts, everyone has an opinion in what they believe. I will give you my opinion of the content of what you have written about in the blog instead of here, to me that makes more sense. I will get to that later on today. Remember these are only to help you, not a bad thing, just trying to help is all. Looks good though so far, keep up the good work and learning.