Just started writing!!! help me improve friends...
By parthu28
@parthu28 (498)
India
May 1, 2009 7:46am CST
hello mylotters.. i ve just started diong some serious writing for freelancing.. I posted an article at bukisa recently.. and have put some bids and got some offers from freelance sites.. But i thought i could take advice from my fellow mylotters as this is one place i come to wether i am happy r sad r in need n what not .. this is the place i luv n mylotters r the true critics i believe.. can you ppl plz take some time to read my article there n comment on it.. where ever possibe..
Well i no posting links is not allowed but as i am not posting any affiliate links i thought i can put this one here..
If the administrator feels its against rules plz remove it..
www.bukisa.com/articles/64718_meditation-an-exersise-to-the-mind
1 response
@mrtimharry (1180)
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1 May 09
Link doesn't seem to exist any more - but looking at the title you might want to spell check your articles.
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@parthu28 (498)
• India
1 May 09
hi mrtimharry i knew you would say that but the matter is the article is originally properly spell checked and the title is also done but the link got the wrong spelling as i was a typing mistake while posting.. thanks
n here is the working link
www.bukisa.com/articles/64718_meditation-an-excersise-to-the-mind
thanks for the comment.
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@mrtimharry (1180)
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1 May 09
It isn't bad but needs a bit more substance to it. Doesn't really say anything people don't really know. Personally would put more about the history, and expand on perhaps medititation classes as well as what can be done alone.
One noticable spelling error -
We have been searching for mental piece and physical fitness.
should be mental peace
Doesn't quite read as if an American or British person had written it, but have seen a lot of articles that are far worse than yours. Keep writing and am sure you will be successful
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