this is a poem I wrote after my daddy died,

By Liz
United States
June 4, 2009 6:07pm CST
Amazing grace, how sweet the sound, The world was bright you see Rose colored glasses hit the ground, Please give them back to me. The yellow brick road I once was told, Would lead to victory, the tin man came And stole my heart, now he's arfer me. Poppy fields dark and gray, I think I'll Take a rest, close my eyes, and forget about All Lifes tests. If you should find the glasses, the ones I left behind, don't look through them, the The bright sunshine, if lost you'll lose your Mind.
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@KikiLove (13)
• United States
5 Jul 09
I can feel the words you wrote in a very deep and uneasy way. As I read your words I opened my heart to the way I felt when I lost my mom. Thank you for sharing your poem and letting me feel your words. Sorry to hear you lost someone so dear.
• United States
5 Jul 09
Thank u so much for understanding
@kalaga (547)
• United States
10 Jun 09
sorry for your loss.that was a nice poem.one can feel your pain in that poem.thanks for sharing with us.
@CJgirly (94)
• United States
5 Jun 09
I really like it, thanks for sharing!