Dream Weaver (DARK)
@additional001 (213)
United States
June 15, 2009 10:55pm CST
Dream Weaver
Master of disquise
keeper of the shadows
I creep through the night
no one ever knows
Through the darkness
I weave
Trace of a nightmare
I leave
Oh what fun seeing
what makes people tick
Through dreams not reality
that's the trick
If you ever see
you'll become a believer
Stay clear of the wrath
of the Dream Weaver
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4 responses
@virtualmirage (494)
• United States
16 Jun 09
Loved Your Poem!!
Nice and dark, I called my daughter over and she agreed with me that its very very good.
Thank you for such a niece piece.
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@additional001 (213)
• United States
16 Jun 09
You are very welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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@allegradream (210)
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16 Jun 09
Excellent, dark and foreboding and gets the imagination working...keep it up, do you have a muse?
@additional001 (213)
• United States
16 Jun 09
Naw I was much more creative and idealistic when I was writing these poems. I don't know really one day it just all sort of went away... and I didn't care much for writing anymore. Whatever it was I lost it, never knew what it was, and never got it back.
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@allegradream (210)
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16 Jun 09
Noooo i dont think you could ever lose your talent, and it is a talent..perhaps you just need some inspiration?
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@additional001 (213)
• United States
17 Jun 09
Indeed I do... but I have yet to figure out what would "inspire" me again. So many ideals I had that fired my desires back then... I have been proved wrong on. If I was wrong about those... well it just kinda kills the inspiration.
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@lifeafterdeath09 (2043)
• United States
31 Mar 10
this is some very good poetry. i am deffinatly impressed by this poetry. it is very moving to hear this. 
