The Black Widow (DARK)

United States
June 16, 2009 8:25pm CST
The Black Widow I fly freely along feeling the fresh cool air Enjoying the essence of life without the burden of a care Suddenly I'm caught in the web of your lies Bound and held by your silky sweet ties Your approach is slow and taunting The view of saliva is dreadfully haunting You spin me around and with great pleasure you dine My blood is young but still a vintage wine As my life drains away I can't help but think This all could have been prevented but now I'm just another drink One more lost soul paying restitution Just a victim of evolution My innocence still in your mind Moving on more victims to find
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allegradream
@allegradream (210)
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18 Jun 09
Wow this is dark, theres a hidden story in this isnt there? Fantastic words though :).."just a victim of evolution"
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additional001
@additional001 (213)
• United States
18 Jun 09
Not really hidden per say... but not totally revealed. You could say that it's about a man... a woman... and there not so pleasant break up. If you know anything about the Black Widow spider... it kills it's mate... so that should sort of bring perspective to it. I mean if they kill there own mates imagine what they do to there prey (which is what I felt like at the time) .
reckon21
@reckon21 (3477)
• Philippines
18 Jun 09
This poems narrates the story of the victim and the destroyer. It's so easy to give in to your craving. When everything is done you feel neglected and violated. However..temptation is always ready to strike anywhere...anytime.
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