my first poem...tell how it is...

India
July 10, 2009 7:34am CST
hi frnds,i used to write many poems in my mother tongue(tamil).but for the first time i have written a poem in english..so please read it and give ur feedbacks.... NOW ITS TIME TO METAMORPHIZE! I was like an innocent child;of the true face of the world,i was blind. May be thats why like a child,they always made me cry. On them did my pin my TRUST and LOVE;but all i got back was SH*T and only SH*T. Am tired of being good,i realize now its time to metamorphize. When the world says "U S*CK", i will not cry;i'll yell back "F*CK U".
1 response
@shibham (16977)
• India
10 Jul 09
hi, just correct your last line.
• India
10 Jul 09
y? watz wrong in da last line?