Pls read my poem adn let me know wot u think! thanks xx
By kinkii09
@kinkii09 (75)
July 23, 2009 9:02pm CST
Self Love:
when life becomes too much to hold onto
sit down and think of those who love you
of those who have needed you many times before
and what they would feel, if you were no more
when life becomes too much to bear
think of those who really do care
when you have brought joy when the darkness is near
and shined effortlessly through thier fear
you're presence in life is worth more than you know
our hearts posses an indescribable glow
that precedes our presence as we struggle on through
like an aura of love, it attracts them to you
you are needed much more here on thhis earth
you need to accept your inner self worth
so tell yourself this when you havebt a clue
to carry on in this life you must love yourself too.
all responses appreciated thanku!! xx
3 responses
@CMTS_87 (1339)
• Philippines
24 Jul 09
I must say your poem is nice!
Very helpful if you want to lift your spirits!
Happy MyLotting!
@defcon505 (919)
• United States
24 Jul 09
Fantastic! Nice poem. It this based on your own personal experience.