i promise
By shreanluck
@shreanluck (86)
Philippines
November 13, 2006 9:10pm CST
I promise to give you the best of myself
and to ask of you no more than you can give.
I promise to respect you as your own person
and to realize that your interests, desires and needs
are no less important than my own.
I promise to share with you my time and my attention
and to bring joy, strength and imagination to our relationship.
I promise to keep myself open to you,
to let you see through the window of my world
into my innermost fears and feelings, secrets and dreams.
I promise to grow along with you,
to be willing to face changes in order to keep
our relationship alive and exciting.
I promise to love you in good times and bad,
with all I have to give and all I feel inside
in the only way I know how,
completely and forever.
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7 responses
@LadyCroft (701)
• Australia
18 Nov 06
This is very beautiful. Sounds alot like vows on a wedding day. Excellent, Well done!!
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@shreanluck (86)
• Philippines
14 Nov 06
tnx 4 apreaciating and 4 the response...yah....i wrote it but not for me...4 my friend may anne and her bf...becoz they are apart....
@moneymind (10510)
• Philippines
29 Nov 06
lovely poem, but i prefer that some one will actually do what they are saying than putting it on promises. greetings. : )
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
7 Dec 06
Nice poem how do you like this one:
Even though we fight a lot, I love you.
We fight, I think, because the stakes are high.
I sometimes get so mad I cannot stand you,
But underneath my anger I could cry.
I have an uncontrolled need to control you,
To be your only destiny and guide.
I know it isn't fair to try to mold you,
But my poor love's entangled in my pride.
Ah, love! Please love me even in my fury,
Which rises like a tide beneath the moon.
I plead before my only judge and jury:
I want to change, but know change won't come soon.
Love finds it hard to let the loved one be
The person who is loved so passionately.
@dnatureofdtrain (5273)
• Janesville, Wisconsin
18 Nov 06
What a wonderful poem, and powerful Message. I hope you promise to keep on writing inspirational messages. Take care - DNatureofDTrain
