Can you have a good story without good writing?

United States
September 12, 2009 4:35pm CST
I've been discussing this with some other writers I know. Is is it possible to tell a good story, but not be a good writer. Personally, I think technical proficiency as a writer and being a storyteller are separate things. While someone can be one or the other you don't have to be one to be the other. There are dry as dust writers who wouldn't know a good story if it hit them in the face and there are exciting writers who don't know the first thing of how to structure a sentence. What do you think?
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@zed_k4 (17589)
• Singapore
13 Sep 09
I think that's possible. Nowadays, being a writer have its own perks and non-perks. Nowadays, a writer don't just write. They have to promote their work, promote on sites, give out links to people in social sites, find a publisher for those wanting to publish a book, go for book meet, have a bit of PR in them and many, many more. It's like being a celebrity in their own right and the work is just a lot. Unless a writer has become so successful - (and I think they have their own people to do the nitty-gritty work), the not yet successful writers have to do their own brand of marketing, PR and whatnot themselves. When I go to bookstores and I look at certain books by different writers like say for instance self-help books, the writings I noticed are not so good a story or detailed enough. And some of those writings are something that I could derive myself by having a common sense. But these are sometimes successful writers, so what's the secret? I think a writer is like a storyteller. Everyone loves to hear a story; be it bad or good. And surprisingly, non good writing can also be under the top list. Why? Maybe very good promotion, good marketing and a whole lot of other strategies. No examples/names to quote, but I'm not surprised if it ever happens. This is my personal take on this topic on a general term.
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@zed_k4 (17589)
• Singapore
15 Sep 09
Sorry for the glitch.. double entry.
@mommaj (23112)
• United States
13 Sep 09
I would have to agree with you. That's why the position of EDITOR was created. LOL I believe a writer should write the story and then go back to make sure the story is what they want portrayed. For example: If you have a run on sentence as long as you can read the sentence and it says what you mean why would you change the sentence structure that would be an editor's job. I am confident that sentence said what I meant, even though the reader may have to infer. If you are a reader that gets distracted by grammer, then you need to make your writing perfect and be sure to get an editing job. lol Personally, I feel you need to know some grammar. It helps make the sentences flow better. However, if you don't do it perfectly, in the professional world there are people who do that.
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• United States
15 Sep 09
mommaj: Editors are indeed a godsend to a writer. I have to respectfully disagree that a writer should only know "some" grammar. Relying on others to "fix" your work is like a carpenter coming to your house and expecting you to sand off the edges of the cabinet he just installed. That's his job. As a writer, it is our job to know the ins and outs of all the tricks of the trade. That includes grammar. Sure, you don't have to be a grammarian. But if you ignore the mechanics of writing you'll never grow. It's our name on the book, not the editor's. Regardless of who did what, it'll be our reputation on the line with the reading public. There are people out there to help you perfect you work, but the more perfect you make it in the first place the better the final product will be. Thanks for responding.
• United States
15 Sep 09
pupupd: J.K. Rowling is definitely a goal for a lot of writers out there. Her stories suck you in and keep you turning pages. But, I'll wager there are a quite a few people out there would suggest that as a technical writer, she's not the best role model. There is no question that as a story-teller, she excels. But, when it comes to technique, um, well...
@pupupd (1515)
• India
13 Sep 09
yes you are right the grammar is very important to make the language look rich and full of creativity which is seen in writing of J.K.Rowling . Every time I read her books, I am at awe, wondering how does she have so many words in her head to explain a situation so beautifully. Of course she does it keeping in mind that readers as young as 8 years will read her books. But also readers as old as 80 years will also read it. So, she writes her novels in such a way that the youngest and oldest equally enjoy her story without any complains. She is one of the best, and new authors can only aspire to become like her, even if they are far away from reaching her level of flair. At least they must take a step towards achieving it. Have a nice day!
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@udnisak (609)
• Australia
13 Sep 09
well as a reder i hav read really messed up books.. we all have.. but when we grow up we try to avoid badly written books and stick with well written books.. so my idea is a good story is wasted if it doesnt hav good writting. peace
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@pupupd (1515)
• India
13 Sep 09
Young readers can bear with a bad quality writing and will continue reading it as long as the plot of the novel is good, but grown readers who have much more expectation from an author will not be able to bear reading a bad quality book. So, it will be a total waste of the good storytellers talent which must not happen, so always it is advisable to get a good editor to edit your novels. Cheers
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• United States
15 Sep 09
udnisak: I wouldn't say a good story is wasted if the writing isn't good. The story is still there and as long as the writing isn't so bad as to destroy the actual meaning and flow, the story still stands. You're right, every reader has come across a book that should have remained a tree. But, that's the nature of the beast. To each his own. I pity the trees who gave their lives for those books.
@mommaj (23112)
• United States
13 Sep 09
At that point it would be the fault of the editor. Usually the plot is there it's just spelling and grammar.
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@snowy22315 (180703)
• United States
13 Sep 09
I think you can have a good story without good writing, but the writing distracts from the story if it isn't readable. I think people will probably end up putting the story down if they find the writing distracting or hard to follow. I think you need a good storyteller in order to tell a good story.
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• United States
16 Sep 09
Agreed. There is no question that exceptionally poor writing will hamper the reader. And no matter how good your premise, if you can't convey it, what's the point? Readers are very forgiving as a general rule, but there will come a point where they say "No more!" On a related note, do you feel that what it takes to be a storyteller can be learned? Is it something innate, or is it something that you can teach yourself? Being a storyteller is different from being a technician. In writing, following all grammar rules all the time can sometimes make your writing boring. Storytellers seem to know when they can and should break the rules. Thanks for responding.
• United States
16 Sep 09
pupupd: I disagree. I think you can have both in one person. The percentage of each may vary, but just because you're a good storyteller doesn't mean you can't be a good writer or vice versa. While it may be rare to have someone who excels at both at the same high level, they can still be pretty high up there. On the technical side, I think that can be more learned than storytelling, as a personal thing, but both can be learned and mastered on some level. Every writer should strive to master them both. It will make their writing stronger and more appealing.
@pupupd (1515)
• India
13 Sep 09
So you need a good writer and a good story teller both at a time. Its rarely possible actually. The percentage of good storyteller is more than good writer, thats why editors are given so much credits. I praise J.K.Rowling because she was herself a English teacher and her English is amazingly rich. As good story without editing will not look nice at all, also a good edited book with lots of good quality words will not gather fans without a good plot or story. Cheers
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@zed_k4 (17589)
• Singapore
13 Sep 09
I think that's possible. Nowadays, being a writer have its own perks and non-perks. Nowadays, a writer don't just write. They have to promote their work, promote on sites, give out links to people in social sites, find a publisher for those wanting to publish a book, go for book meet, have a bit of PR in them and many, many more. It's like being a celebrity in their own right and the work is just a lot. Unless a writer has become so successful - (and I think they have their own people to do the nitty-gritty work), the not yet successful writers have to do their own brand of marketing, PR and whatnot themselves. When I go to bookstores and I look at certain books by different writers like say for instance self-help books, the writings I noticed are not so good a story or detailed enough. And some of those writings are something that I could derive myself by having a common sense. But these are sometimes successful writers, so what's the secret? I think a writer is like a storyteller. Everyone loves to hear a story; be it bad or good. And surprisingly, non good writing can also be under the top list. Why? Maybe very good promotion, good marketing and a whole lot of other strategies. No examples/names to quote, but I'm not surprised if it ever happens. This is my personal take on this topic on a general term..
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• United States
14 Sep 09
You're right. Writers have to be marketers now. We have to do PR, to really sell ourselves to the world. In essence, we have to make ourselves celebrities. It's a little oxymoronic, considering most writers are introverts by nature. Still, the nature of the beast is the nature of the beast. As to you point about self-help books being common sense that you could derive yourself, isn't that the way most of that stuff works? I've read a lot criticism of various gurus who merely repackage what someone could find on their own. Okay, fair enough, but that's what people are paying them for. Yeah, you could figure it all out yourself, but they did it for you. I'm not saying that it isn't a little frustrating to pick up a book and say "Thanks a lot, I knew that." But for some it might be helpful. People should never underestimate the power of marketing. Sales pushes can make people buy things they never would otherwise. But writing is subjective and what one person hates another will love, so it all depends on who's the judge. Thanks for responding.
@zed_k4 (17589)
• Singapore
15 Sep 09
Yes2.. talent plus marketing skills equate to a good writer. Writing career is something unique and special. It takes a whole lot more than the literal sight.
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• United States
19 Sep 09
Writing is becoming a more jack-of-all-trades sort of profession. Good or bad, *shrugs* More the nature of a changing field. In the end, I think, all writers are explorers of a kind, so having to push themselves into new fields of exploration (marketing) is probably not a bad thing.
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• United States
15 Sep 09
I agree with you on this. Some people can write a good story. But not be able to put it in a good sentence. But there are writers out there that can't tell a story to save them. I like reading good stories. Even though I can't write one. Some people can be very talented in that area. I am one this is not good at it.
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• United States
18 Sep 09
The nice thing about writing (or anything) is you can always get better. The only thing that keeps people from excelling at what they really want in life is not pursuing it. Granted, there are those with innate talent who make us all feel like we should just quit now. But, they work at what they do and there is no reason why the rest of us shouldn't do the same. I think it's very human to like good stories. It's how we relate to each other. Every time we relate what's happened to us, we're telling a story and we all know people who can't do that to save their lives. Thanks for responding.
• United States
19 Sep 09
As long as a critique is productive, I see nothing wrong with it. We grow from critiquing. Compliments don't really help us. But when people tear into a piece for whatever reason without really trying to help the author, they're not doing anyone a lick of good. Keep enjoying those stories.
• United States
19 Sep 09
Your very welcome and I agree with you about everything you said. I love to read good stories. Know one is going to be perfect at writing stories all the time. I don't think its right when other people cut down on someone that is trying there best at writing one. Have a great night.
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@rmuxagirl (7548)
• United States
16 Sep 09
I honestly don't think you can have a good story without good writing. If you don't know how to write properly, I dont think you can have a good story. You can have the basis of a good story without good writing. Add good writing and the good basics then you will have a great story.
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• United States
18 Sep 09
Yes, but isn't their a difference between structuring a story and structuring a sentence. I can have a good plot that moves along at a nice clip but be redundant in my word choice, or choppy in my paragraphs. If you don't know how to write, then you're right. Any story littered with spelling errors and awkward construction would become too tiresome to read, but there's a large gulf between that kind of writing and great writing. Thanks for responding.
@sid556 (30960)
• United States
19 Sep 09
Hi there, I agree that these are two different talents altogether. A person can be a very great and exciting storyteller. Such a person can make an otherwise boring story hilarious or intense simply by the animated way in which they go about telling it. That same person may have no writing talent at all. Others seem better at putting their words to paper.
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• United States
20 Sep 09
It's true that the storytelling aspect of writing is very different from the writing part of writing. I think it stems from the oral tradition that still governs so much of our communication. We, as people, are used to being told stories. We're still new to this reading thing in comparison. Do you feel that people can augment their storytelling by learning the mechanics of writing? Personally, I think the latter can be taught and learned. As such a person who may not have as much talent can become a much better writer and storyteller. Thank you for responding.
@abhi_bangal (5533)
• Ahmednagar, India
13 Sep 09
I think this objective is quite difficult to achieve. Or better not achieved. I mean both are two sides of the same coin and so both need to go hand-in-hand. They are like to tracks of the railway which should remain parralel to each other and more importantly travel together. And if anyone falls apart then most likely, the writing is bound to fall. I think I am better in the latter. I mean in writing good and using good and appropriate words that fit into a jigsaw. But I am immensly lacking the ideas and stories. What should I do?
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• United States
15 Sep 09
You're right that they do go together. And when both are in sync, the result is amazing. But instead of seeing as train tracks, I would see one as the engine and the other as the fuel. The more and better your fuel, the farther you'll go. The less, etc. Working on both is integral to a career as a writer. As for the lack of ideas, welcome to the club. My only suggestion, look around you. Not just at the people, but the things. Take two things that aren't related at all. For example, an elephant and an elevator. Write about them together. Create something in 500 words that has to do with elephants and elevators. See what happens. Chances are the act of thinking about two unrelated things will spur other thoughts and then ideas. Sometimes we get too bogged down in having a "complete" idea. Just a spark is all you need. Let the story carry you.
@pupupd (1515)
• India
13 Sep 09
Yes, there are many in my country who have a talent of writing very interesting stories but lack in the ability to write well. One of them is my friend, whom I am helping with editing his new novel, which he decided to write after getting inspiration from other young authors. My friend is from a vernacular school, he studied all his subjects in his mother tongue which is Marathi till high secondary, so he has a problem framing a good descriptive sentence in English. Though he gets brilliant ideas about how to explain or compare a particular situation with some other one, as done in most of the novels nowadays, he somewhat makes up the huge sentence with grammatical errors or the ones which are very casual and will not suit in a good English novel. He is exceptionally talented in Marathi, according to me, he can be a great writer in Marathi, but he has decided to write his new book in English so that it can reach out to huge mass all across India. So my friend is a living example of a person who has a good interesting story with a little less talent of good language. He has improved considerably in past few months I have to say. Have a nice day.
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• United States
16 Sep 09
Your friend is a good example of how over simplistic my question was. The fact that his ability to write in his native tongue well shows that he has combination of the two talents. Grasping a completely foreign language is a third talent in and of itself. Being a native English speaker, I have an affinity for the tongue, but I'll be the first to admit that each language has its own feel and rhythm. Being able to utilize those features in your writings is the mark of someone who is trying to master writer. There is an intrinsic difference between writing in one language and another. Each has its own idioms, images, etc. Your friend doesn't lack talent in the mechanics of writing in his own tongue, he just lacks it when striking out in a completely new one. That has less to do with his writing and more to do with the challenge he is trying to surmount. Thanks for responding.
@dorannmwin (36392)
• United States
13 Sep 09
I think you are absolutely right. I am not a spectacular artist when it comes to the proper composition of writing, but I can tell a good story. I've always got the stories in my head. It is the act of getting them onto paper in the correct composition that is a problem for me. I'd love to be able to write a book, but the problems with that lie in the fact that I would have to have about twenty editors to make everything correct. Now, if I was able to give an audio version of my stories and have someone to transcribe for me I think I would be in good shape.
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@Masssko (238)
• Estonia
12 Sep 09
I must agree with you, as I am one of the prominent representative of the first type of people. It's quite simple for me to write some well-structured reports, I even used to be a journalist in local press, but when the task is to write interesting story (fictional or not) I'm even more than empty. I have a structure, but don't find suitable words to fill this, to make the narrative interesting to my readers. I also know people of the second type. Great storytellers, actors, but when it comes to writing, that's total disaster. It would be perfect to have both qualities in one person, and in my opinion this combination makes real talent. Jolly myLotting!
@Masssko (238)
• Estonia
13 Sep 09
I think that technique of putting words that you have in right order is quite simple to learn, whereas the storytelling is more like the matter of talent to me. I may be wrong of course.
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• United States
19 Sep 09
You're not wrong. Learning subject precedes verb seems quite simplistic, but putting those subjects and verbs together in a creative and new way is the challenging part. I think you can teach people to polish their writing technique, but it is more than just putting one word in front of each other. There is no right or wrong answer here. It's all opinion. As frustrating as it can be, we are all the only judge of how we feel about this issue.
@forptc (287)
• Philippines
13 Sep 09
I sure think it's very possible for one to tell a really good story without being very great at writing. But somehow it all depends. If it were writing in consideration of aesthetics, it could be really impressive to common readers and true blue writers alike but it's the content of the material that would be contested afterward. Sometimes, great writers tell great stories but some just mask the lack in plot creativity with very well done sentence construction and idea cohesion. Some great storytellers use very simple expression and yet impress readers with their stories. The best part with writing stories is the story itself and how it is presented making sure that it reaches out to your target market and that would definitely make your stories sell like pancakes and might leave a really big impact on society. It's mostly on how well one could present the story and express one's self regardless of proficiency in a certain language, though it does help to know a bit more because it makes writing a lot easier and expressing a lot simpler.
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• United States
18 Sep 09
In fiction, beautiful prose will only get you so far. However, there is a difference between plot driven stories and character driven stories. A character driven story can be as interesting as a plot driven one. And vice versa. As a writer, one tries to combine all the different aspects to create the "perfect" creation. You're right, sometimes writers will rely on their artistic construction as opposed to actually telling us a story. Sort of like the filler words people use in school to pad word count. The better at the technical aspects a writer is, the more tools in his/her toolbox. It is another means to expressing their story in a way that grabs readers and makes them read on. Thanks for responding.
@calai618 (1773)
• Philippines
13 Sep 09
I definitely have to agree with you. I think a very good story, or concept for that matter, would still sell or attract attention even with the lack of technical aspects. Ordinary stories however can also be extraordinary with the help of proper construction/writing.
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• United States
15 Sep 09
Totally. One without the other may still produce a decent product. But when you combine the two, you have the sublime. There is no excuse for any writer not to develop both aspects of their art. They play into each other. Also, as times change, so does what the public wants. Right now, with the rise of genre, story is becoming much more important to be a commercial success. That's not to say it wasn't always integral, but now, it's the big deal. About fifty years ago, a beautiful constructed sentence was far more the ideal. Thanks for responding.
• United States
13 Sep 09
I disagree, with some ifs, ands, and buts. There are people who don't know the difference between good writing and poor writing, so for them, if the story is interesting, that's all that's necessary. But if you've very comfortable with language and do know the difference between good writing and bad, then a poorly written story might just as well not have been written. Poor writing is distracting, it detracts from the effect the writer is trying to create, and it can completely spoil the mood. For instance, I've been reading a fair amount of fan fiction lately, which has been quite an experience. One story wasn't bad, but when I got to the line "...his eyes fluttered to the floor," the effect of what the writer was trying to accomplish disappeared when I started laughing. She meant that his eyelids fluttered and he looked down at the floor, but what came across was someone's eyes falling out of his head and onto the floor. Too many amateurs excuse their lack of writing ability by saying that the story is what's really important. But that ability can be learned. It's hard work and takes a long time, but if a person really cares about their writing, they'll work at it, not make excuses.
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• United States
14 Sep 09
Writing that is distracting from the narrative is enough to kill the best story out there. Your example is apt. Eyes fluttering to the floor, there's a mental image for you. You're right, a lot of people use the story as an excuse for not perfecting the mechanics of writing. And let's face it, without decent writing communication is lost. We have rules for a reason, they make communication easier. If one doesn't follow those rules or learn them, he/she is hampering their ability to be understood. However, assuming decent writing (enough to be understood clearly) can you have a great story with good writing that on the whole is still great? No arguments from me. Writing is a craft. There is no craft out there that someone is just "born" knowing. Hard work is part of every passion. Thanks for responding.
@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
13 Sep 09
hi maybe not but it sure helps in trying to sell your good story if it looks good also. I am not a great grammatist either' but would love to get better at making my writing look good'as well a as read well. its so hard to juggle all these things when you are struck by the muse.you just want to write stuff down while its fresh in your mind.
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• United States
14 Sep 09
And that is exactly why there is rewriting. When the muse hits you have no choice but get the words on the page immediately. Unfortunately, when you do this you make all the mistakes along the way. If you're thinking how to improve each and every sentence as you type, you'll never get done. The mechanics can be polished. In my opinion, they can be polished more easily than the story itself. On the one hand you are dealing with tiny details, on the other you are trying to change big concepts. But no matter where you are on the continuum of talent, rewriting/editing is not optional. Nobody gets it perfect the first go round. Nobody.
@pukaprat2 (442)
• United States
13 Sep 09
this is exactly why I put my story out there, for people to give me an insight as to whether or not I can hold their attention with my stuff. I want to publish a book more than anything right now. And I have written a few stories - most of them over 40,000 words. But I just finished a short story and posted it to my site. Its free to download and I would love some advise on improving my writing. If you don't mind checking it out - terrorismfreedom.weebly.com
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• United States
15 Sep 09
Getting feedback is one of the hardest parts of being a writer. We sit in our little dens, relentlessly putting words to paper and in all that time the only eyes to see our magnum opus are our own. It's challenging to find that reality check which will enable us to improve as writers. Again the subjectivity of the art form rears its ugly head. If you get feedback from someone who doesn't appreciate your genre or your form, they might just kill a brilliant piece of writing. It sounds like you've got a lot of stories to tell. Getting 40,000 words isn't easy. Are you hoping to publish a novel or a collection? With word counts like that, you're not far from a novel right now. If I can, I'll swing by and check out your story. But be careful about publishing online, once you put it up there, you cannot sell the first rights to a "traditional" publisher. You might want to check out the writing critique sites out there. They offer workshopping and can help you with your writing. Writing.com is a good one. Thanks for responding.
• United States
12 Sep 09
It's absolutely possible to be a good storyteller but not be able to get your thoughts/ideas down on the paper. That's why there are ghostwriters and editors. People who have dyslexia or other similar learning disorders have trouble getting the words down on the paper in a coherent manner but that doesn't make them any less genius when it comes to telling a story verbally.
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• United States
13 Sep 09
You're right. And you bring up an interesting point. There is a difference between the spoken story and the written story (audio books notwithstanding). When we tell a story we use different techniques and have to follow a more abbreviated outline than when we write it down. So, do you think that the oral story-tellers of old would be good authors of today? In the end is it all about the story? Does the writing matter at all? (Beyond comprehensible language).
13 Sep 09
I agree. Although it also works the other way. By this I mean a poor story that is written with good sentence structure can still be successful and entertaining.
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• United States
13 Sep 09
Can it? I don't know. In the end it's the story that matters, isn't it? If you can craft beautiful sentences but nothing happens or nobody does anything, does it really count as entertaining? I don't know. I think that while a beautiful turn of phrase is a wonderful thing, personally, I rather fall in love with the story or the characters. Successful is a different story. In the middle of the last century, I think, there was a greater emphasis on the writing and not the story. These books were successful, no question, but I don't know how entertaining they were. But, that's just my opinion. The beauty and the curse of writing is just how subjective it is. One man's entertaining is another man's snooze-fest. Thanks for your response.
@pmalik23 (43)
• India
13 Sep 09
Hi, I agree. There are tech writers who will be great at crafting an article but may not be able to bring out the depth and senstivity of a story while someone with great story ideas may not have the tech know how of structuring it well enough to grab attention. However, I think it is part of the writer's education to build on strengths and overcoem weaknesses. So, while I may be great at writing in the third person, but my articles are all newsy and not stories, so i feel that I do need to work on putting things correctly and interestingly in the first person. IMHO
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• United States
14 Sep 09
You're right. Different writing calls for different skills. However, no matter what you're writing about, you're telling a story. It may not be a Harry Potterish story, but it's still a narrative about something. Even the driest information follows a narrative pattern. But, I was talking more about fiction and news articles in my question. Trying to stretch yourself as a writer by branching off into new formats is an integral part of being a writer. If we always do the same thing our readers will become bored with our work. Thanks for responding.