Lets have a poetry contest!
By CodyWilliams
@CodyWilliams (142)
United States
November 13, 2006 10:46pm CST
Use only stuff you've written ... I WILL be googling each one. Best one gets the pick!!! Here's mine!
Crazy In Love
I sense my mind breaking down
I can feel it
This seems to happen frequently
My thoughts putting me down
And then I think of you
The times we've had
All the things we've shared
The love we've had
It seems to make the sun brighter
The grass seems a shade greener
A glass of water even tastes better
When I'm thinking of you
We've grown apart ... yet you've grown closer to me
It makes me crazy
Literally crazy
In love with you.
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4 responses
@belenR (256)
• Philippines
14 Nov 06
here's mine..............
GOODBYE
Today is the time to say goodbye to somebody
Somebody you loved most
I knew before its easy to let go of someone
But its not...
It may really hurt you so much
But you can't do anything
You know, you made everything for him
But he never appreciate it...it hurts
Its really hard to move on
But after all, the only thing you can say is "GOODBYE"
@aurryinne (66)
• Singapore
14 Nov 06
The first has a spiritual feel and origin...
When I am silent
When I listen with my heart
Relax my guard
Feel the flowing over me
Washing through me
Washing around me
Feeling -
Flowing -
Gentle. Peaceful. Loving. Spirit.
Washing through me, 'round me
Relaxing.Influencing.Subtle.Spirit.
The second is a repost from a request for critique, romantic, but jaded.
A myriad of impressions fall into place.
Breathe caught in throat
Sensual. Lithe. Sensitive.
He speaks to my heart.
Drink in -
Every curve, line, breath.
Abrupt sense of shattering.
Flown apart
High and lifted up
Soaring. Shattering. Crashing.
@magdollars23 (1684)
• United States
14 Nov 06
dont feel like it right now but i will type up one of my raps later
@CodyWilliams (142)
• United States
14 Nov 06
Do it! I've been thinkin about writing some rap ... but I dont really have the flow. I'd really have to work at it.
