heres a poem i wrote especially for u rayne

United States
November 13, 2006 10:53pm CST
Me and You When I first talked to you I felt like I had known you forever, telling you my problems and what I didn't want ever. You listened to me I bet you thought I'd never end, who would have thought we would be the best of friends. Over a period of time, I got to know the real you. A guy so charming and gentle, with a heart so true. You've survived your life with me by your side. I told you I'd never leave because of the feelings I have inside. There was a time I wanted to explore, what would have happened if I would only open the door. I know you like no one I have ever known, and sometimes I wonder what do I do when we're alone?So I have decided time answers all. If it is meant to be time will remove the wall. Standing between us, holding us back, allowing us to feel It's the relationship that we lack. I love the way we are together, you can always make me smile. Will it ever really be forever? I guess I will have to wait awhile. Time will reveal, what lies ahead but always remember what I have said. Meeting you has changed my life and I really love you so, the feelings I feel for you I am never letting go. Remember me always and I will too. I will always think of me and you.
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@Bunny2 (2102)
• Australia
22 Nov 06
Just gorgeous! well done.
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• United States
23 Nov 06
i am so glad u like them thanks for ur response
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• United States
4 Feb 07
thanks so much u are a great friend
@Bunny2 (2102)
• Australia
7 Jan 07
Thanks for marking me as the best response. I hope you continue with your poetry and gain a lot of pleasure from it.
@killailla (1301)
• Canada
23 Nov 06
that is such a sweet poem, but to me sounded more like a love letter! but very sweet
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• United States
24 Nov 06
thanks for ur response...glad u like it
@blueman (16509)
• India
21 Nov 06
good poem.
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• United States
23 Nov 06
thanks glad u like it....thanks for ur response