Careful Little Eyes
By Aingealicia
@Aingealicia (1905)
United States
September 27, 2009 11:07am CST
***I must warn the reader that my poem, though it may seem odd, is very well constructed and even has hidden passages in it if you catch them. The grammar is correct in the context in which I am using it. Constructive critics are welcomed of course, however, please know if my punctuation or spelling seems off, please be mindful and remember I am using poetic license for such actions. Perhaps it is for the reader to take note and extra care with that passage of verse. With that being said, please, welcome to my parlor. I think even Dante would be proud of this one. ***
Sitting,
the Matrix
presented a
Concrete Jungle.
Thousands of people
Condensed into a wild society.
Some leaders of the world.
Some simply angels
As beggars’ on the streets.
I watch;
see.
Welcomed to a world most
Can not;
Do not;
Are not:
Chosen to see.
Feeling the pain
the blood left
from the Glock
Shot in the night
As Harlem crying baby’s now
Live in Brooklyn
Thinking life is better
On the other side of the Bridge.
Over the water,
through the trees.
Still:
body’s float the same
in
The East Tidal Straight
That flows to Long Island
with out
Recognition or
Sound.
By the plain
I did come
To this Alice in Wonderland box
Of sick,
Twisted,
Exquisite,
Frail,
Beauty.
Seeing the Underworld
Raising the bar
With in
As
Death looms
With
The
Undivided
Near
Existence:
Life we have.
As the daily ticker tapes
Pass
Whole
normal
3rd world countries,
As
the price on their
head is higher
when
Served cold.
Hands;
Minds;
Hearts:
Watch the heartland
Never knowing
never really to see
the slight of hand
That has been exposed to me
In the Original
City of
Superlative,
Luxury
For only
a few can see
with in the veil
the realm with in.
We are the Original Garden.
The Magickal Unseen.
48 hours
in
A day
With
Time Square Ticking
Away in a mediocrity
of passive
aggressive
Terminal
Illness that will
eat like a cancer
Until the sin has
Spread in
rooted tree.
Starting,
with a simple
dream of a lady
See
Much like
Merlyn being lead
To the side of Lancelot
rather than
Seeing
the son
I came by way of the plain
The heartbeat of the unseen.
In dreams
Simple sugar plum
thoughts
Visions
of rainbows
these
Dreams…
Slumber now;
wonder true.
What has this poem to do with you?
For I only write what the muses want me to seek.
For there are miles to go
before I finish the reap.
I came by the plain,
Tis true,
but the apple
poisoned me,
now tis time
for you.
Careful little eyes what you know,
As the slight of hand is your Freedom foe.
1 response
@Aingealicia (1905)
• United States
20 Nov 09
I love this poem. Wait till you see my new stuff. I will get it up as I can.
Ainge