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United States
October 7, 2009 7:46pm CST
I woke up decided its time for a change Ill take it slow but try all day to be better I've been hating who i am It's time to start new but i cant i wanna be better, make me better chorus- i try to be perfect try to be strong try to be close to right and far from wrong i try to be perfect and the best i can be I try to be more of you and less of me I wont let your words take me cause i know im far from empty i can be better i wont let the world change me this is my life this is who i am im better i know better chorus x2 i wanna be like you i wanna breathe you in, breathe you in i wanna try to live this life i just wanna make you proud chorus I, I wanna be like you I, I wanna breathe you in I, I just wanna make your proud
2 responses
• India
8 Oct 09
this song you have written is full of emotions. i love emotion songs, the song is good. record the song and send it to me ::--))
• United States
8 Oct 09
again thanks :) should i post more up here?
• United States
8 Oct 09
I like it. It seems full of emotion and honesty. If you ever record it, I would love to hear it!
• United States
8 Oct 09
thanks :)