judge this!
By soiree
@soiree (36)
India
November 9, 2009 8:19am CST
Hi people out there...am bored of looking at common topics being discussed in mylot. Stories always take us to the world of fantasy. Here is one, combined with reality. Here is a story of a girl, its partly real and partly imaginative.
So here it is... there is a girl in a city like chennai, well brought up although not from a well-to-do family. She came from a calm and composed family. Like many of the teenagers, the world of love was something unclear. She was not so attached to her parents. When she started hearing and seeing things about love, she was desperate to "love" some.
Apparently there is this guy in her neighbourhood. She happened to become close with him for few weeks. She started feeling him to be the one for her. One fine day she expressed her feeling for him. This guy dint expect this kind of an offer; he hesitated and told that it'll not work out b'coz she is still young in school and he was working. He justified saying there were so many girls behind him in the office but still he does not like all that stuff.But later, as days passed she was all high in love and this guy eventually fell in love too. They were just great together but still, this girl was still a kid to take life's decisions.
They swam in the ocean of love, both understood each other very well. The only mode of contact became the telephone b'coz the guy was transferred to some other place. They missed each other badly. The girl eventually completed school and it was time for her to go to college. Apparently,she got a college in the place where this guy works. Still they conversation dint get any better than through in a phone coz she was in th hostel. They met once in a while.
The girl came to know things around her, how people are.... totally, she understood that life is not what she was thinking it would be. After college, she would spend hours talking over the phone. Being a good looking girl, many guys in the college were behind her. But she really dint like all that.
Luckily, she got great friends in college. They were people with insight to achieve great things in life. She started feeling like a grown up now!...She knew life better. She started fixing goals, analysed constraints and pecking up to work towards it. On the other hand, she dint have much time to spend with her guy like before. She never felt bad or something for being that way, coz she always felt she was on the right track.
Days grew and lesser the time she spent with him. AND she started feeling that this was not the right time to decide on life(too late!!)....now she started ignoring the guy totally. The guy, saldy dint know why she was behaving all indifferent. She told this issue to one of her friends; she too incremented to her thought that this was not the right age to fall in love!...
She knew this would hurt him too much. But,she picked up courage and told what was on her mind. The guy went dumbstruck!!! Coz he was imagining a life with her and he could not imagine a life without her. He went on convincing her that he would do anything for her and change anything JUST for her. But this girl dint pay attention to all this coz only now she came to know what life is and had decided not to make a mistake(although she did one already)...
She became obstinate while the guy broke day by day. The pressure started developing on the guy's family. He was on the age of marriage so his widowed mom wanted to get him married. The guy told the issues to his mom and she too preferred to wait for the girl to make up her mind. But that never happened. Years passed. His mom lost hope and asked him to get married some other girl. That was hurting him like hell. He dint know whom to convince.. his girl or his mom!... His mom started pleading him. He tried many times to call her up and meet her. Everytime, it was negative answer.
His mom's heart started breaking and he could feel it. He was confused about what he must do. Apparently, a girl from his office was madly in love with him eventhough he dint know her much. His mom came to know about this and talked to the girl at office. She jumped up and down when his mom came over to her and asked her to get her married. Now, both of them joined hands and were trying to convince him to marry her. She told how much she loved him and not to care about the girl who left him.
But this guy was not able to forget his love. He approached her again. He told her things happening at home. She told him to get married to that girl from his office. The guy was broken to peices again. She said not to meet or contact her again!!..... From then on they never met or talked....
At home, these two people were in full swing to convince him. At one point the guy gave in for it just for his mom...They both got married.
This girl is still working towards her goal. Probably, few more years later she would get married to some other guy!
So, whom do you think went wrong??
the guy or the girl??
Justify.
Thanks for spending time on this story.
cya!
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