Book Title

United States
December 1, 2009 6:50pm CST
Hello i want to know what would be a good title for a book im writting.... The book is about this whole new world where vampires live among humans. Thr main character(a girl)is against this. when she is seen by a 'watcher'(that is a vampire) she has to go to the Council that rules the vampire community. She learns more about them but she is never canged into one(vampire). The enemy whants to get hold of her because they think that the ones that had been seen by a 'watcher' would be more powerful than them when converted. They get close on catching her but the assigned guard of hers gets in between and is taken away because the enemy know that him and er have fallen for each other. Please do help. Thank You.
4 responses
@jndlponti (2402)
• Philippines
11 Dec 09
Hi Hazelhk... Welcome to mylot. I think your book is really interesting. It would be a little similar to those twilight movie but i know that your story would also be a hit maker. I think you would make a title of something that describes the girl or something that is much important between the girl and her watcher. You could even use the word "WATCHER" for a title. I think it sounded great and interesting. Good luck. Hope to have a copy of your book one day.
@jndlponti (2402)
• Philippines
1 May 12
Hi hazelhk hows your book going now? It' been more than two years now since the time we had this discussion. I was so grateful you marked me best response. I was kind of thinking whether that suggested tittle turn out to be exactly the tittle of your book. I am so exited for that. I hope I could have a copy of that book you are writing. Hope to hear from you again soon.
• United States
15 Dec 09
Thanks' for the welcoming. I knew it would make people think about Twilight Saga and that's one of the reasons I made it totally diffrent that at the end is going to shock to those who read the story. You will never see it coming:) Thanks' for the ideas. pretty good ones by the way.
@JAG2009 (266)
• India
11 Dec 09
Sounds like an interesting story. How about 'Watching the Watcher' or 'Watchers & Catchers' or 'Catchers can't be Watchers' I'm obviously paraphrasing some famous titles, but I think that can make them catchy titles and grab people's attention. After all, you do want people interested, don't you? Good luck with the book.
• United States
15 Dec 09
Yeah I do want people interested. Thank you for the ideas:)
• United States
2 Dec 09
"Hidden Soul" or "Keeper Of The Secrets" try those on, good luck.
• United States
2 Dec 09
Thanks! I really appreciate for your help. Thank you really:)
• Philippines
2 Dec 09
I think your story is interesting. For the title, I don't know. Maybe try "Forbidden"? or something close to that. Are you finished with your book? Goodluck with that, and hope to see your work out there!....
• United States
2 Dec 09
hey thanks! I'm half done but I'm really loking foward finishing the book. First I'm going to post it at inkpop.com so people can give me their opinions. Thanks again. Really good idea there:)