life
By chandra121
@chandra121 (1)
December 3, 2009 7:46pm CST
hi,
life is not a thing to do
not a thing to stop
not a case to solve
not a rapper to through
not a ball to miss
it
all about living it
and all about meaning it
3 responses
@dinglover (52)
• China
4 Dec 09
Yes, to live is just to feel, to know, to realize and to experience. the journey means much more than the destination.
@Apple3Cranberry (678)
• United States
4 Dec 09
Nice poem, it is refreshing to have poetry here. It is good to mean it. And I think that all of your statements are true, and that also their opposites are true. It is good to mean it. We should know who we are. And what is true for us. Like when we write a poem, it is unique to ourselves. Another person may find another meaning or comment on it. The thing about being a writer is that we should be open to others criticism. But not all the time. Like if you are in a writing class. And stuff.
@miamilady (4910)
• United States
4 Dec 09
Good words.
Life is not in the destination, but the journey.
