I hit the wrong button and submitted the short story discussion. Oops.

Hi Boofybutt, I like it. A really nice story just at the right time of year. I could really see you and your son sitting on the porch. It's simple, clean and very imaginative! I would've like to have known what you wished for maybe finishing the story with the revealing of this wish (and this is just an idea, that you wished that his wish would come true)would really round it off. It made my heart all fluttery and I am not saying all of this just to be gentle, it's a good piece and very well written. One question: Can 16,000 feet of snow really fall? wouldn't everyone be snowed in and under? I don't know as I am from London originally and any inch of snow falling causes mayhem. Just two feet of snow causes people to ditch their cars on motorways. Let me know how your stories pan out. I write myself and have not yet shown anyone a whole story so if you're interested I could post up some excerpts. Good one, keep it up.