A poem for a friend,what do you think?
By babyangie27
@babyangie27 (5176)
United States
January 12, 2010 11:43am CST
Someone's birthday is today and I thought a poem would be fitting,what do you think of it?
[b]Roses are red
Violets are blue
Today is dawnald's birthday
Let's all go to the ZOO!!!![/b]
So do you like it? Do you think it is fitting for her? Since she is queen of the Roses are red poems and all.
Do you have a better poem for our friend Dawnald?
So do you like it? Do you think it is fitting for her? Since she is queen of the Roses are red poems and all.
Do you have a better poem for our friend Dawnald?1 person likes this
6 responses
@cloudwatcher (6861)
• Australia
12 Jan 10
How fitting to do a "Roses are red" for Dawn on her birthday.
She is the Queen of them, but as her adoring subjects, we can all add our tributes.
Roses are red,
Dawn is true blue.
When all else is said,
She's a friend ever true.
Roses are red,
But Dawn loves purple.
If this goes to her head,
We'll still love her enurple.
(What rhymes with purple?)
@cloudwatcher (6861)
• Australia
12 Jan 10
Chuckles? What happened to the chocolates?
Oh! I forgot - no more chocs for me! Alas.
A brownie? - May be just as bad.
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
12 Jan 10
Wonderful Cloudwatcher! And I agree Dawn is a truly amazing friend.
I am not sure what rhymes with purple? I think that is why I stuck with the short poem myself.
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
12 Jan 10
Thank you I enjoyed writing it and I hope she likes it too. I thought the Zoo part was funny to add and since she has an awesome sense of humor that she would enjoy that as well.
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
12 Jan 10
Of course you ARE the birthday girl after all!
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
12 Jan 10
I hope not?!?!?!? I did ask what others would place a poem to you,so far no one as though 
I hope your day is going good so far. Any special presents yet?
I hope your day is going good so far. Any special presents yet?1 person likes this
@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
12 Jan 10
Well that is always nice when the men in our life remember to do somehting huh?1 person likes this
@dawnald (85146)
• Shingle Springs, California
12 Jan 10
well now...
Husband got me an Allan Sherman boxed set (he was a comedian who set his own words to familiar songs). When I turned my car on, one of the songs was on the radio and for a second there I was convinced he had slipped one of the cds in.
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@Opal26 (17679)
• United States
13 Jan 10
Hey babyangie! OMG! I had no idea that it was this wonderful
lady's birthday! And imagine now for her to keep a secret!
So a very Happy Birthday to you Dawn! I hope that you have many
more happy and healthy ones too! How did angie know and not
the rest of us? I really hope that your family is treating you
to something wonderful! Hugs, Opal
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
13 Jan 10
She is my friend on yuwie and facebook so they tell me when her birthday is lol. like my poem???
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
15 Jan 10
Aw 
thanks! I try my best for my friends online to let them know I think of them even if I am not around as much as I was before.
thanks! I try my best for my friends online to let them know I think of them even if I am not around as much as I was before.1 person likes this
@dawnald (85146)
• Shingle Springs, California
15 Feb 10
Whoops, I missed this one. Thanks for the birthday wishes!!! 
@purplealabaster (22091)
• United States
13 Jan 10
Dawn's dress is purple
It goes with the fashion
For purple I hear
Is the color of passion.
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@babyangie27 (5176)
• United States
13 Jan 10
PURPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heya girlie! I like that one. I hear purple is very hard to rhyme with,seems to be true wouldn't ya say?
@purplealabaster (22091)
• United States
13 Jan 10
Yeah, I got stuck on one of those trying to rhyme with purple, so now I try to creatively include it on a line where I do not have to try to find a rhyme for it. Besides, Irish was talking about "boozing it up", and Purple Passion is a drink. I have never tried it, but I hear that it is good.
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