"Write this" (poem)
By vine88
@vine88 (1031)
India
April 15, 2010 1:28am CST
Write this (poem heading, title)
""I write this.
I am not writing this.
Before writing this.
Something inside me said write this.""
I've written this poem 11 nov. 2000. Feelings came in my mind and wrote this. While writing something it happens to me... what about you...my mind says to write.. and then i will write..
There's always a friend inside me... that's my mind.. always talking with him..i am not alone..
do you have such kinda feelings...
Actually we are two. Me and my self. Me and my mind (Soul). Me and the witness of mine. That's only mine witness of life....some thing like that .....
just drop this ...in the topic thinker...
if you like drop your comments, love to hear from your side...
thanks
-vine.
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13 responses
@mercedlegurpa (955)
• Philippines
15 Apr 10
Hi vine88, the title I think is this: To write or not to write.
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@jhesse03 (35)
• Philippines
15 Apr 10
wow.. it's amazing that i had the chance to read this.. me too.. i'm experiencng things like that.. i used to talk to myself.. but for me, everytime i do it, it's not me who i am talking to.. it's someone inside me who can hear and listen to my feelings and everything i cannot say to any member of my family or friend..
i also write poem.. :)
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@syankee525 (6261)
• United States
15 Apr 10
when i write its comes from my heart, i write what i feel about my wife or other people in my life. or i write about what happening in others life.
i took my poetry and turn it into write songs, had a few record as well.
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@pandaeyes (2065)
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15 Apr 10
I have written poetry before.
Usually it just says itself in my head but not for quite a long time now.
I like how you say you are two people ,one that is the friend inside you.
Some call that their inner voice, some their conscience and some their essential self.
Its almost like we have a guardian angel that only we can hear.
Not the same as hearing voices, that is completely different, this is more about thoughts making themselves clear.
@kun2349 (23381)
• Singapore
21 Apr 10
It's quite nice, and it's so true as well.. We are never alone, because we are constantly thinking.. THrough thinking, we are talking to ourself too, and creating many different topics to think about.. haha =D 
I like the fluency of the whole poem, and though it's short, but it's sweet and brings us to the point right away.. hehe 
I like the fluency of the whole poem, and though it's short, but it's sweet and brings us to the point right away.. hehe 
@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
15 Apr 10
hi vine yes I call this me, myself, and I. thats the way I often feel when something prompts me to write, and I find myself putting something down i had never intended to write, yet something else inside me insisted I do this, so perhaps thats the me of myself, and myself is the vehicle through which this thing was written then I come to it and wonder just why I needed to write this particular thing at this precise moment.
I think I call my mind my self, anyway it all works together and I
put something down for some reason my mind thinks is really important.
@nice030481 (1109)
• Philippines
16 Apr 10
me too, most of the time, i was talking with myself to. because i wanted to hear myself, only myself understand my emotion, and only myself share with my dreams. Of course i dont want other to see that i was talking to myself because maybe they'll think that i'm crazy.
@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
7 Aug 12
Hello again. Revisited your art; it's even better than I remembered! Superior! I took one & made it my computer's wallpaper. Thank you, from a fellow artist!
Maggiepie
@Maggiepie (7816)
• United States
17 Apr 10
I know this is off topic, but--intrigued by your avatar--I went to your profile...& fell in love with your art!! I especially enjoyed "Himalaya."
Maggiepie
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@dorannmwin (36392)
• United States
17 Apr 10
That is a very interesting poem that you've written and I definitely thank you for sharing it. For me, I think my mind operates in much the same way as yours does. When my mind tells me that it is time to write, then I don't have any other choice at that period in time. I believe that is the reason that even today after having moved over a year ago I am still coming across things in the boxes that we've yet to unpack that I've written in the past.
