this is my world that is your world
By replyashu
@replyashu (745)
India
April 28, 2010 8:30pm CST
This is my world, small as it is,
It is a planet by itself with very
Small moons, and tiny stars,
And so tiny, you cannot just
See me there, I am hiding,
But I still live here just the same,
Breathing atomic air, and drinking
Molecular waters, so you see,
How tiny I could be, how tiny
I could get, but this is my
Small happy world, my smile
My laughter so tiny, that you
Cannot hear, you cannot feel,
And that is your world as big
As the sun, with comets and
Meteors, and so big and so
Wide, with oceans and rivers,
And continents, and gigantic
Arctics, and snowy lands, and
We are then so different, and
With me, there is no problem,
I, in my small world, can fit
In yours, but you, you cannot
Fit in mine, that we must
Accept, I am a small world,
And you are a space still expanding,
Now, do you understand,
why I hide?
why I shy away from you?
1 response
@consultrainer (4991)
• India
29 Apr 10
friend, ashu..... Just because you can cut, copy and paste ... you have started off so many threads? ... i am not happy with such broad subjects that you broached. Anyhow, I will start responding slowly. These topics are lying idle for over 8 hours, with no responses.
And,I take this as a challange to see that there are no zero response topics in mylot, as long as i am active. How is that for a challange? .lols.
Now, friend, of all the poem-lines in this topic, I dare say, you tried to be humble before the person to whom you address. It is rather sheepish. anyhow, a wonderful poem.
If it is with GOD, or your LOVER ... wonderful again. Goodluck.
@replyashu (745)
• India
29 Apr 10
thanxs for your response........
i will be out of station wef tomorrow onwards, so posted so many discussions