http://www.blaynebittner.com I started my own web site please give your opinion.

Canada
May 5, 2010 5:05am CST
Let me know what you think of my web site and my short stories... http://www.blaynebittner.com/
1 response
ElicBxn
@ElicBxn (63755)
• United States
5 May 10
I read your little story, and first, an epilogue is at the END of the story not the beginning. There are some serious rough spots, but it really has a lot of possibilities.