Please could you give me some feedback on my song?
By luneliza
@luneliza (197)
May 9, 2010 4:40pm CST
This is an original song I wrote after my mother's death. I know the recording is unprofessional and my singing and playing abilities limited to say the least, but at the moment this is the only way to bring my lyrics to life. I would appreciate your feedback and your honest comments on the song & lyrics (not the performance). Thank you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQDaFiV3OEw
1 response
@criizz180 (42)
• United States
9 May 10
It's pretty good actually and I enjoyed it. The message was strong and it was written for a very serious purpose. You're very strong and I bet you put all you emotions into it. Don't let anyone tell you that it was bad because it was beautiful.
