The bloody rain which describes....
By staylor7506
@staylor7506 (45)
United States
May 30, 2010 12:36pm CST
This is a Poem I wrote back in October of last year. The poem describes How was I feels When my X husband came back from Iraq. At the time he was not my x husband, but the stuff I went through was enough for me to need a way to vent. So I hope you post back on this and let me know what you think.
The bloody rain which describes...
You can not see it,
but you feel it,
There is a rain pouring down,
a rain so red,
so very red.
A soul cries out some where in the dark,
the rain continues to fall,
with each cry,
the drops fall faster,
ever so much harder.
List and watch,
the rain never fades,
just pours harder yet faster,
each droplet reflecting the hidden pain,
the grief hidden inside.
If you listen ever so closely,
you can feel the misery and torment,
the rain falls at a steady pace,
harder and faster,
till there is no more blood to give.
The heart cries out in pain,
fades away,
not one more beat,
her struggle comes to an end,
she finally gives in.
The pain and torment,
to much to bear,
the life without love just gives in,
everything she fights for,
forever gone.
All because the one,
she knew should complete her,
never came through,
never kept his promise to her,
to be all she needed of him.
Her shoulder to cry on when times got rough,
the person she could always talk to,
her better half,
her equal.
And her best Friend.
Stephanie Taylor
October 24th 2008
1 response
@cheatedaphrodite (810)
• Philippines
30 May 10
Very nice poem. I do love writing poems too and I have a lot of them. I will be sharing them soon.
@staylor7506 (45)
• United States
30 May 10
i have always been very expressive. I usually write poems when I am either feeling something or need to vent. This specific poem was because I really needed to vent. I wasn't ready to face him face to face and most likely start a conflict.