Would this type of blog be succesful?

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I'm trying to do a different type of blog. Can you give me suggestions on what to do and how to improve it? I'm doing a blor except not on my opinions or whatever. I'm trying to create a story in blog form and submitting it as a blog. Would anybody read this type of blog? If you want to see what this looks like, just post a comment and I will give you the link.