100615 daily composition 'asking for help'
By likeabird
@likeabird (8)
China
June 15, 2010 1:42pm CST
I love english, but I don't have some opportunities to communicate with native speakers.
And I do want to impove my english in a short time so that I could read more...
If you are a native enlish speaker, pl correct my mistake or tell me the natural saying as below. I'm not afraid of being laughing at.. just want to learn more... Thanks.
100615 For this part, writhe an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
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Dear friends,
There is a student in our school need our help for his seriously disease. Please see his personal information as follows:
Jason is a grade two student, major in Philosophy. He studies very hard. But unfortunately, he was checked from a routine examination to get the nose cancer. At first, he thought maybe just a normal flue, and then, it was getting worse and led him hard to breath.
His family is not that rich, it actually has cost most of their savings for his medicine fees. And they cannot afford any fees anymore. Most serious period has passed away, but he still needs a surgery.
What we can do is to try our best to help him, whatever money or the survival faith.
If you see this letter, please do not hesitate to contact us as below information:
Address: Room1801, No.1 building, West part of school
Contact person: Jessica Silver
Students union center
The End
God, I even don't konw how to begin it!
Need your help...
1 response
@urbandekay (18278)
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15 Jun 10
Dear friend,
I should very much like to take the opportunity to introduce you to Jason, a student at this school, very much in need of your help.
Jason, is a hard working student, majoring in Philosophy, who has sufered the misfortune of contracting cancer of the nose. This was diagnosed when he attended a physician, suffering from what he presumed to be a case of influenza, which was causeing him some dificulty breathing.
His family, who are by no means rich, have helped him financially to the limit of their means, and although his treatement has proved largely succesful, their resources are depleted to the point where they can no longer afford to pay for the surgery he still requires.
He must therefore, trust in the beneficence and charity of his fellow students and hopes his plight moves your heart to give whatever you feel you can afford.
Please dear friend, contact Jesica Silver, Room 1801, No.1 building, West wing of this school.
all the best urban
