What is your favorite verse in a Poem and why?
@mychickencurry (317)
Philippines
July 13, 2010 6:35pm CST
Mine was:
Line from: "Unheard Lies Behind My Poetry"
Author: Mark Lester dela Pena
"Unwanted tears come in black,
I was waiting here but you never come back,
I tried to stay away and hide the pain,
But I still can't see you coming back again."
Reason: I love the whole poem but this verse really touch my heart, it reminds me of the struggles and trials I've experienced when I was a kid.
What's yours?
1 response
@lologirl2021 (5542)
• United States
23 Oct 12
Im not much into poetry at all but i somewhat feel someones pain in your verse you just typed. its like someone is getting divorced and dont see that person ever coming back in there life and the tears the person has are in black. but im sure there are so many other ways that people see this poem in there life. I dont have divorced parents at all and have never been through a divorce of my own jsut bad break ups. I must say that is a great verse. Happy mylotting.
