Body defenses
By stanly012992
@stanly012992 (241)
Philippines
September 16, 2010 5:39pm CST
Hi,
This is the poem that I read in the internet
My absent Father.
If I were a clock
Then you couldn't be the wall
Cause you weren't there
To catch my cruel fall.
What do you think it is good or not because I observe there's something in this poem
1 response
@Rebeccarogers2010 (269)
• United States
17 Sep 10
it has potential it really needs to be expanded but it is a good start for a great poem, a lot of emotion.
