My First Composition for Piano... What do you think?
By K46620
@K46620 (1986)
United States
October 29, 2010 2:38pm CST
Here's my first and only piano composition so far, what do you think? I'm ready to hear any criticism, and will not be offended by it
Here's the recording of it:
http://www.gather.com/viewVideo.action?id=11821949021911205
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Here's the recording of it:
http://www.gather.com/viewVideo.action?id=11821949021911205
or ?1 response
@PM2727 (11)
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18 Feb 11
Wow! My first composition was nowhere near as good as this! It's great and sounds good, but it just feels a little repetitive. Try breaking it up with more expression, such as dynamic changes and maybe the occaisional rall. Also, make the amount of time you play each chord vary, for instance, make the chords that sound like they need to be resolved longer than the others, because it makes you want to listen. Great though ;)
