Poetry

@Pyroo8 (121)
United States
November 5, 2010 10:56am CST
My lifes for ever in black and white... For ever i write with a pen.... i fight the hard times... so meny thoughts run throw my mind.... looking in side but trying to for get the hard times Tears in my Eyes are like rivers rolling down....vallys... to a mouth so thirsty...with a voice thats only trying to be heard.... Lend me your Ears.... take away the hurt... Hear me and make it feel so much better.... can poems trully last for ever.... i get missunderstud like a miss spelled word.... not noing i wrote that one on perpiss... i only want u to listen with your Eyes.... And Blink everytime u feel touched... from something i said....the black gets dark... and the white shows so fuzzy.... u cant see because u need a heart to read me... feel me....Hear its only me.... Poetry.....
1 response
• United States
5 Nov 10
Nice, nice, this you write From pen and from heart Battle till all senses smart Still the mind lest it blight Your tears I feel in my soul Consumed by that it eats Pained by all the eerie bleats Used to pay the dreaded toll This muse indeed does ever last Never mind who can tell That you do, you do swell Eternity indeed is vast
• United States
6 Nov 10
I really liked your poem, we should all try our best to understand each other, would save us a lot of grief. Great work. And by the way, thanks for the BR.