What do you think about my poems??

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I've written 2 poems so far and i'd like to have some comments about them... I know they are sad ones but that is because i was thinking about the past when i wrote those 2 poems.. I'd just like to have some opinions, how to get better as i am not a professional.. Here they are, please have a look: http://authspot.com/poetry/never-again-27/ http://authspot.com/poetry/cant-go-back-to-yesterday/