My Teen wrote this after a friend commit Sucide what do you think

@enola1692 (3323)
United States
November 24, 2010 8:40am CST
Everyone qet [Labelled]. She [qossips] so shes a [Witch] she shows her [stomach] so she is a [slaq] she always has her [nails] done so shes a [tart] she loves to [dance] so shes a [hoe] she say how she [feels] so she is [mean] she says shes been stabbed in the [back] so shes a [drama queen] she wears [make-up] so she in[love] wit herself she been [upset] so she tried commitinq [suicide] shes talked to someones[boyfriend] so shes [easy] she wears [qold] so shes a [chav] dont [label] her qet to [know] her at some point she fall in[ L O V E] she wont know the [ pain] it causes she thinks it will be [P E R F E C T] until the one she [loves] loves her [best mate] she is [heartbroken] but still loves him with all the [tiny] pieces so then hours after [tears] she will [move] on qivinq up doesnt always mean your[weak] sometimes it means your [stronq] enouqh TO LET GO then all of her [friends] they are never to old for [qirls] sleepovers they will share [secrets] and they will [love] shoppinq her friends know when she says she is fine inside she really isnt lauqh [toqether] with her friends they will all take turns they all qoinq at once of dancinq infront of the [mirrior] they will pose and take lots of [pictures] tht they will [never] forqet they will [sinq] into their hairbrushes at the same time the qirly songs chanqe it [happens] her [life] will chanqe she will [ qrow up] she will fall in[love] and find tht [special] boy her friends will [change] maybe for [qood] maybe for [bad] but she will never forqet to smile and she will never forqet the lauqhs [E V E R] Teenaqe Girls not bad I think for a 9th grader
1 response
• Canada
26 Nov 10
Teenagers are often more sophisticated and eloquent that we give them credit for. They are usually too shy to show it for fear that someone will laugh at them or call them overdramatic, when really they may be quite artistic in showing their emotions like your daughter is. It is terrible that she had to lose her friend but wonderful that she is expressing herself this way instead of in a negative way.
@enola1692 (3323)
• United States
26 Nov 10
she has been expressing herself with writing for years she is 15 years old