Advice me on this written poem of mine.
By wowstephanie
@wowstephanie (7)
December 2, 2010 8:40am CST
Thank you for being that special father
Who makes my life glow.
Any man can be a father but it takes a victorious and faithful one to be a daddy.
A daddy is a special person for that I can be sure,
for they make their child's heart sing with happiness of admiration.
The first perfect thing you ever did was given your love to me.
The second most fabulous and fantastic thing you have ever given me was a perfect mother so true.
I just want to let you know, fly high or low you means the world to me.
Whenever I am weak your there to sweet me off my feet,
and use comforting words to make me strong again.
I want to be a daddy's girl and forever I shall be,
Sitting and talking to you is all I want to do
1 response
@academic2 (7000)
• Uganda
2 Dec 10
This is a very intimately written poem, and I can only say it is absolutely touching-so touching that even a stone-cold heart will feel it! "A job Well done" is all i can say about this poem!
