my poem on love triangle, my pain
By rinkudatta
@rinkudatta (26)
India
December 5, 2010 12:30pm CST
HI FRIENDS,
AFTER A LONG TIME IM STARTING A DISCUSSION, TODAY SUDDENLY SOMETHING STRUCK MY MIND AND HERE I M SHARING AFTER MANY YEARS SOMETHING WHICH I NEVER WANTED TO. YES I HAD A HABIT OF WRITING AND TODAY I WANT TO SHARE A POEM WRITTEN BY ME. FRIENDS I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW IF YOU LIKE IT, GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES IF ANY I WOULD BE OBLIGED TO GET YR FEEDBACK.
(1) she loves u like anything (3) may god bless and keep u fine
you too love her like everything for she, the lovely rose
i know i have no place here and you her sunshine
for im no one and nothing may u always be together
for this is my prayer
(2) so plz bid me goodbye and this is my rhyme
for i shall see u never
do make it a point to forget me (4) grateful would be i
but i shall be yours forever if u could lastly forgive me
for now i could lie on the deathbed
quite silently and peacefully
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