moving or staying
By qianyunlv
@qianyunlv (23)
China
December 14, 2010 10:36pm CST
this is a composition topic my teacher asked us to do. we are supposed to choose either moving or staying. the topic is specific about staying at a place or moving around. personally I choose moving. as I'm at my early age, I want to experience more and take the risk to see different lifestyle. however, i still don't know how to write it.
this is the beginning of my composition
choices are the building block in our lives. the choice you make, shape your life and define who you are. staying or moving that is a choice.
at the second paragraph, i want to analysis the advantages and disadvantages on both staying and moving and claim that I prefer moving. at the third paragraph I want to explain the reasons why moving is better in my point of view. the last paragraph is supposed to sum up.
this is the main structure of my composition . however I don't know how to write it down.
so can you help me ? any advice or critical comment are acceptable.
have a good day
1 response
@aeiou78 (3445)
• Malaysia
15 Dec 10
Moving around is a very good adventure experience.
You can have a chance to explore and to gain valuable experience and knowledge.
At the time you are older, you might change your mind for not moving around.
At certain ages, we are more suitable to do certain things we like to.
Since I am still young, I must grab this opportunity to make my dream come true.
Will this be good enough for you?
@qianyunlv (23)
• China
15 Dec 10
thanks! that's good for me. I agree with you. move around at early age then settle down at old age is also my dream. however, we are only allowed to choose one side
