sad ness

India
December 19, 2010 3:23pm CST
sad night A beating in my chest says yes now Sadness. is in the air and not to disguise. How hot embers are my eyes. I'm not able to write well because there's more to see the letters are confusing, like ink blots What do I do? they fall into my feelings,erasing them. They are the ones that I left. I'm just in the open. No! Something with me. I can already hear it. It's the wind ... He's crying.
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• Calgary, Alberta
24 Dec 10
My mind is tired with too much Wear and tear, All events in my life me make see how life is unfair There I was jaded and lost looking at the sky I know there is still pain eventhough I cant cry -------- Thats a nice poem going on there. I do write stuff too, specially when I was frustrated.
• India
24 Dec 10
hey dude nice reply thanks a lot.. why you getting frustration?on whom?be clam...you can write many more stuff.all the best take care.have a nice day..
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