Silent Plea for Help: A Poem
By Virginians
@Virginians (440)
United States
November 19, 2006 2:56am CST
Please let me know what you think of this poem.
My hands are tied
By my own words
Nothing is real
My soul yearns
All I can do is sit here
Hold my breath
Hope you can learn to accept me
I want to give you your wish
To open your mind to dreams
Help me from these bonds of solitude
That I may start again
This time we can take on the world
If you will stand by me
If you will hold my hand
1 response
@chadmonson (19)
• United States
22 Nov 06
Good stuff. o_O Sounds like you've got yourself a little love issue going on, and I hope that clears up for ya. But yeah, sometimes pain and suffering bring forth the most beautiful things this world has to offer.
@Virginians (440)
• United States
22 Nov 06
Not really, I wrote that poem several years ago. And even back then it wasn't so much a problem, as a thoughtful view on what love could be like if both sides helped one another as they should.
@chadmonson (19)
• United States
23 Nov 06
Touche. Well then...My apologies. But yeah...I stick to my original statement that pain and sufferign still bring out some of the most beautiful things in the world.
