Still Holding On

@mjweed21 (693)
Philippines
March 6, 2011 3:09am CST
I was on a vacation when I composed this poem. Writing poems is my way of expressing my real feelings. In the midst I stumbled very lost and wounded. It weakened me not, instead My way to you I shall find. 'Tis the path that I take Dark and elusive, I daresay A journey 'twas vague Yet 'tis the risk I must face. I just do hope that he will realize how much I love him.
1 response
LeighB
@LeighB (700)
• Thailand
6 Mar 11
Hi Mjweed, I have just read your poem and it certainly sums up the feelings that must have been within you on your holiday. Are you still in contact with the recipitant of this poem? I also find myself writing poetry to convey my inner feelings when the spoken word just can't be uttered. It is a great way of letting others know your true feelings even when apart.
mjweed21
@mjweed21 (693)
• Philippines
7 Mar 11
Yes, I am. And I gave him a letter wherein I also attached the poem. However, up until now I haven't receive reactions from him though we're seeing each other constantly. *sigh*
LeighB
@LeighB (700)
• Thailand
7 Mar 11
As you are both still in touch and seeing each other constantly, I guess your poem must have struck the right chord. But sometime it is nice to get a little feedback. I wish yu both the best of luck for continued happiness.
mjweed21
@mjweed21 (693)
• Philippines
15 Mar 11
Thanks, LeighB!